Snacks— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 你的回答自然且内容丰富，但可以更简洁，避免冗余。例如，最后一句话可以更简练地表达，且连接词使用可以更流畅。

예시: I usually have snacks in the evening to relax after a busy day. For instance, I often eat fruits or nuts, which are both tasty and healthy. Additionally, I exercise regularly to stay fit and balance my diet.

제안: 回答内容具体且结构清晰，但可以增加更多连接词使句子更连贯，同时避免重复表达“healthy”。

예시: Yes, I believe eating snacks can be healthy if chosen wisely. For example, I prefer fresh fruits and mixed nuts because they provide essential nutrients. Furthermore, these snacks encourage me to stay active and exercise regularly.

제안: 回答中最后一句不完整，影响表达清晰度。建议补充完整句子，并使用连接词使内容更连贯。

예시: When I was young, I rarely ate snacks because my parents believed they were unhealthy and could harm my teeth. However, I occasionally ate chips or candy, which made me feel excited but also guilty. Later, my parents explained the importance of healthy eating, which helped me understand better.

제안: 最后一句话“ I prefer this fruit.”不明确且重复，建议删除或改为具体说明喜欢的水果。整体回答可更连贯。

예시: My favorite snacks are fresh fruits such as apples and berries because they are delicious and nutritious. I usually eat them in the afternoon since they quickly replenish my energy without making me feel too full.

× One day, my parents found out and patiently explained what it's important to eat healthily and.

✓ One day, my parents found out and patiently explained that it's important to eat healthily.

句子结构错误，原句中“explained what it's important to eat healthily and”结构不完整且不符合英语表达习惯。应使用“explained that...”引导宾语从句，表达“他们解释说健康饮食很重要”。建议改为“explained that it's important to eat healthily”。