Snacks— Part 1 채점 보고서
대화
Part 1
시험관
When do you usually eat snacks now?
수험생
To be honest, I am not as arid as before when it comes to eating snacks. I guess it's mainly about my diet. Habit has changed a lot since I turned older, but overall I think it's a positive impact on me.
시험관
Do you think it is healthy for you to eat snacks?
수험생
We all know the fact that most of the snacks are not wholesome for people. However, I guess what we derive from the snacks are a sense of happiness, satisfaction and excitement. So physically I don't regard them healthily, but mentally I think they are beneficial.
시험관
Did you often eat snacks when you were young?
수험생
Yes, definitely. I had spent a lot of time eating snacks and I even skipped dinner and lunch with snacks, which were quite detrimental to my health. And later when I got older, I realized that it was not good for my health.
시험관
What snacks do you like to eat?
수험생
I prefer snacks that are a suite such as a candy, cakes and chocolates. I have to admit that every time I try those kinds of food, I have a sense of happiness and it made me overjoyed and boost my mood.
평가
총점
Part 1
When do you usually eat snacks now?
점수: 60.0제안: 你的回答中有一些用词不准确，比如“arid”用来形容吃零食不合适，应该用“addicted”或“fond of”。建议用更自然的表达方式，并且回答可以更直接，避免模糊和冗余。
예시: I usually eat snacks less often now because I have changed my diet habits as I got older. This change has had a positive effect on my health.
Do you think it is healthy for you to eat snacks?
점수: 75.0제안: 回答内容较好，但表达上有些重复和不够简洁。建议使用更准确的词汇，如“nutritious”代替“wholesome”，并且用连接词使句子更流畅。
예시: Most snacks are not very nutritious, so they are not healthy physically. However, eating snacks can bring me happiness and improve my mood, which is beneficial mentally.
Did you often eat snacks when you were young?
점수: 80.0제안: 回答结构清晰，但部分表达不够地道，如“spent a lot of time eating snacks”可以改为“used to eat snacks frequently”。建议使用更自然的表达和连接词。
예시: Yes, definitely. I used to eat snacks frequently and sometimes even skipped meals, which was harmful to my health. Later, I realized this was not a good habit.
What snacks do you like to eat?
점수: 70.0제안: 回答中有拼写错误（suite应为sweet），且表达有些重复。建议用更准确的词汇和简洁的句子表达情感。
예시: I like sweet snacks such as candy, cakes, and chocolates. Eating them always makes me happy and improves my mood.
문법
× I prefer snacks that are a suite such as a candy, cakes and chocolates.
✓ I prefer snacks that are sweet, such as candy, cakes, and chocolates.
这里'suite'应为'sweet'，表示甜的。'a candy'中的冠词'a'不适用于不可数名词candy，应直接用'candy'。此外，'cakes'和'chocolates'为复数形式，符合语境。建议使用'sweet'形容词来描述零食的味道。
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