Snacks— Part 1 채점 보고서
대화
Part 1
시험관
When do you usually eat snacks now?
수험생
Umm, no, because I think snacks is not, are not very healthy to me, so I hardly eat uh, snacks, uh, recently.
시험관
Do you think it is healthy for you to eat snacks?
수험생
Uh, I don't think so. I think, uh, next are not really, uh, health because there are many, uh, things in the snacks like uh, too hot or too, uh, heaviest.
시험관
Did you often eat snacks when you were young?
수험생
Yes, of course. You know, children very like uh, uh, snacks like candy or chips, uh, they are so sweet and uh, delicious. I think uh, not children can uh, ignore economic it.
시험관
What snacks do you like to eat?
수험생
I really like dessert and some sweet snacks because they are good way to treat my emotion when I feel sad or my study is very My studies are very hard they can give.
평가
총점
Part 1
When do you usually eat snacks now?
점수: 50.0제안: 回答不够自然且表达不清晰，句子结构混乱，建议简洁明了地直接回答问题，并避免重复和犹豫词。
예시: I rarely eat snacks nowadays because I believe they are unhealthy for me.
Do you think it is healthy for you to eat snacks?
점수: 40.0제안: 表达不流畅且词汇使用错误，建议使用准确的词汇描述原因，并且句子要连贯。
예시: I don't think snacks are healthy because they often contain too much fat and sugar.
Did you often eat snacks when you were young?
점수: 45.0제안: 回答中有语法错误和不连贯的表达，建议使用完整句子并清晰表达观点。
예시: Yes, I used to eat snacks like candy and chips often because children usually enjoy sweet and tasty treats.
What snacks do you like to eat?
점수: 50.0제안: 回答不完整且表达混乱，建议完整表达喜欢的零食及原因，句子结构要清晰。
예시: I enjoy eating desserts and sweet snacks because they help me feel better when I'm stressed or sad due to my studies.
문법
× Umm, no, because I think snacks is not, are not very healthy to me, so I hardly eat uh, snacks, uh, recently.
✓ Umm, no, because I think snacks are not very healthy for me, so I hardly eat snacks recently.
snacks 是复数名词，谓语动词应使用复数形式 are，而不是 is。这里还需注意介词用法，healthy 后面应接 for me。
× Uh, I don't think so. I think, uh, next are not really, uh, health because there are many, uh, things in the snacks like uh, too hot or too, uh, heaviest.
✓ Uh, I don't think so. I think snacks are not really healthy because there are many things in snacks like too hot or too heavy.
next 应为 snacks，且 snacks 是复数，谓语用 are。health 应改为形容词 healthy。too hot 和 too heaviest 结构错误，应为 too hot 和 too heavy。
× Yes, of course. You know, children very like uh, uh, snacks like candy or chips, uh, they are so sweet and uh, delicious. I think uh, not children can uh, ignore economic it.
✓ Yes, of course. You know, children really like snacks like candy or chips, they are so sweet and delicious. I think children cannot ignore economics.
children 是复数，谓语动词用 like。very like 不合适，应为 really like。economic 是形容词，名词应为 economics。句子结构需调整使表达更通顺。
× I really like dessert and some sweet snacks because they are good way to treat my emotion when I feel sad or my study is very My studies are very hard they can give.
✓ I really like dessert and some sweet snacks because they are a good way to treat my emotions when I feel sad or when my studies are very hard.
way 是单数，前面需加不定冠词 a。emotion 应为复数 emotions。study 应为复数 studies，且句子结构需调整以表达完整意思。
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