Patience— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答中存在语法和表达上的不自然，如“come down to sync up with some solutions to solve”表达不清晰，建议使用更自然的表达方式，并注意句子结构的完整性。

예시: Yes, I consider myself a patient person. For example, when I encounter difficult assignments, I take time to calmly think and find effective solutions.

제안: 回答中有语法错误和用词不当，如“tired about them”应为“tired of them”，建议注意介词的正确使用，并尝试使用连接词使表达更连贯。

예시: I feel impatient when people repeat themselves frequently. For instance, if someone keeps asking me about the progress of a task repeatedly, it can make me feel frustrated.

제안: 回答不连贯，句子断裂且表达不完整，建议练习句子结构，使用连接词使句子流畅，并完整表达观点。

예시: It depends on the task. If I am forced to do something, I usually get bored after a long time. However, if I am willing to do it, I can stay focused and not get bored.

제안: 回答较好，但“patient to listen to them”表达不够自然，建议使用更地道的表达方式，并丰富细节。

예시: Yes, my job demands a lot of patience. For example, when I interact with patients who find it hard to express their feelings about their illness, I patiently listen and try to understand them.

제안: 回答中有语法错误，如“as the age progressed”应为“as I have grown older”，建议注意时态和表达的准确性。

예시: Yes, I am more patient now than when I was a child. As I have grown older, I have learned to wait calmly instead of expecting immediate results.

× I will try to come down to sync up with some solutions to solve.

✓ I will try to come up with some solutions to solve.

短语“come down to sync up with”用法不正确，正确表达是“come up with”，表示“想出、提出”。这里需要用动词短语“come up with”来表达“想出解决方案”。

× I dislike others repeating.

✓ I dislike others repeating things.

动词“dislike”后面接动名词时，通常需要明确动作的对象，这里应补充“things”来明确“重复的内容”。

× When I listen to a person who is repeating something for many times, I will be tired about them.

✓ When I listen to a person who is repeating something many times, I get tired of them.

“for many times”应改为“many times”，且“tired about”应改为“tired of”，这是固定搭配。

× if someone assigns me a task and ask for the progress about it again and again, it may make me impatient.

✓ if someone assigns me a task and asks about the progress again and again, it may make me impatient.

“ask for the progress about it”表达不自然，应改为“asks about the progress”，且主谓一致“ask”应改为“asks”。

× It depends on what kind of things I have to do. If I'm forced to do something, I will get bored after. A long time, but if I'm willing to do I will not get bored until.

✓ It depends on what kind of things I have to do. If I'm forced to do something, I will get bored after a long time, but if I'm willing to do it, I will not get bored.

句子结构混乱，“after. A long time,”应合并为“after a long time”，且“if I'm willing to do”后缺少宾语“it”，句尾“until”多余。

× For instance, when dealing with patients who struggle to express their feeling about their illness, I will be patient to listen to them.

✓ For instance, when dealing with patients who struggle to express their feelings about their illness, I will be patient and listen to them.

“feeling”应为复数“feelings”，且“be patient to listen”表达不自然，应改为“be patient and listen”。

× Yes, I think I'm more patient now than I was a child.

✓ Yes, I think I'm more patient now than I was as a child.

比较结构中缺少介词“as”，应为“than I was as a child”，表示“比我小时候更有耐心”。

× But now as the age progressed, I gradually learned to be patient.

✓ But now as I have grown older, I have gradually learned to be patient.

“as the age progressed”表达不自然，应改为“as I have grown older”，更符合语境。