Patience— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 你的回答表达了观点，但语法和用词不够准确，且有些重复。建议注意时态一致性，避免语法错误，并减少口头语“uh”。可以用更自然的表达方式来描述自己的情绪和行为。

예시: No, I don't consider myself a patient person. When I face difficulties, I often feel frustrated and overwhelmed. However, recently I have been practicing mindfulness and meditation to help control my emotions and stay calm.

제안: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题。建议使用更准确的时态和词汇，避免重复，并用连接词使句子更连贯。

예시: For example, when I encounter major problems, I usually feel angry and impatient at first. If my schedule is very tight, I don't have enough time to solve these issues calmly.

제안: 回答不够清晰，语法和表达混乱，缺乏连贯性。建议简洁明了地表达观点，使用正确的语法和连接词，避免口头语。

예시: When I have to do something for a long time, I like to make a plan and break the task into smaller parts. For instance, I write down the main topic first and then allocate my time to complete each part step by step.

제안: 回答内容较好，但表达有些不自然，语法和用词需改进。建议使用更准确的表达方式，避免口头语，并使句子更流畅。

예시: Yes, as an international seller, I deal with many different customers every day. When I encounter an impatient customer, I try to understand their perspective so that I can communicate effectively and avoid any misunderstandings.

제안: 回答表达了观点，但语法错误较多，且句子结构不够清晰。建议注意冠词和时态的使用，避免重复，并用更自然的表达方式。

예시: Definitely, I have become more patient as I grew up because it helps me a lot in my work and studies. If I were impatient, I might have missed important opportunities, such as getting a good job.

× Sometimes if I met some struggles, I tend to be in frustrating and overwhelmed.

✓ Sometimes if I meet some struggles, I tend to be frustrated and overwhelmed.

这里的时间状语是一般现在时，条件句中应使用一般现在时的动词形式'meet'，而不是过去式'met'。此外，'be in frustrating and overwhelmed'表达不正确，应改为形容词'frustrated and overwhelmed'。

× Sometimes if I met some struggles, I tend to be in frustrating and overwhelmed.

✓ Sometimes if I meet some struggles, I tend to be frustrated and overwhelmed.

'frustrating'是现在分词，表示使人感到沮丧的事物，形容人的情绪时应使用过去分词'frustrated'。同理，'overwhelmed'是正确的形容词形式。

× A case in point is that when I met some big issues, I tend to be in angry at 1st and impatient.

✓ A case in point is that when I meet some big issues, I tend to be angry at first and impatient.

条件句中描述习惯性动作，应使用一般现在时'meet'，而非过去式'met'。另外，'be in angry'表达错误，应直接用形容词'be angry'。

× A case in point is that when I met some big issues, I tend to be in angry at 1st and impatient.

✓ A case in point is that when I meet some big issues, I tend to be angry at first and impatient.

'be in angry'是不正确的表达，形容词前不需要介词'in'，应直接用'be angry'。

× Like if I have some difficulties from that high schedule, I have no extra time to solve the problems.

✓ Like if I have some difficulties with that tight schedule, I have no extra time to solve the problems.

'difficulties from'用法不当，正确搭配是'difficulties with'，表示遇到某事有困难。

× I feel like I have to make some plans to, uh, being a part of those things details one by one.

✓ I feel like I have to make some plans to, uh, be a part of those things, details one by one.

'to'后面应接动词原形，'to being'错误，应改为'to be'。

× For example, I would like to write down a topic at 1st and then I just, uh, dilute my time, uh, from 1 by 1's things.

✓ For example, I would like to write down a topic at first and then I just, uh, divide my time, uh, for things one by one.

'dilute my time'用词不当，应为'divide my time'表示分配时间；'from 1 by 1's things'表达混乱，应改为'for things one by one'。

× And then I just, uh, if I finish.

✓ And then I just, uh, finish.

句子缺少谓语动词，'if I finish'结构不完整，应直接用'finish'。

× If I face an impatient customer, I have to understand what he thought, and then I try to dive into, uh, his thoughts so that I can communicate with them better instead of being impatient may cause a hassle.

✓ If I face an impatient customer, I have to understand what he thinks, and then I try to dive into, uh, his thoughts so that I can communicate with him better instead of being impatient which may cause a hassle.

'he thought'时态错误，应为现在时'thinks'；'communicate with them'指代不一致，前文为单数客户，应改为'him'；'instead of being impatient may cause a hassle'句子结构不完整，需加连接词'which'。

× Definitely, after growing up I try to practice how to be a patient person because it helps me a lot in my work and study.

✓ Definitely, after growing up I try to practice how to be a patient person because it helps me a lot in my work and study.

此句无明显形容词或副词错误，保持原句。

× If if I were a impatient person, I would miss some opportunities in study.

✓ If I were an impatient person, I would miss some opportunities in study.

'a impatient'冠词使用错误，'impatient'以元音音素开头，应使用'an'。

× For example, I would like to miss the time to get a job.

✓ For example, I would like to miss the opportunity to get a job.

'miss the time'表达不准确，通常说'miss the opportunity'表示错过机会。