Patience— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 你的回答表达了观点，但语法和表达不够自然，且有重复和语法错误。建议简化句子结构，避免重复，并使用更自然的表达方式。

예시: To be honest, I'm not very patient. For example, when I have to wait in a long line for something I really want, I often feel impatient and frustrated.

제안: 回答中有语法错误和重复，表达不够清晰。建议使用连贯的句子，避免重复，并用连接词使回答更流畅。

예시: As I mentioned before, waiting in long lines makes me impatient. Also, if my parents are late, I get impatient because I find it hard to wait.

제안: 回答中有语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，且部分词汇使用不当。建议注意时态和词汇的正确使用，表达更具体和连贯。

예시: It depends on the situation. If I'm doing something I enjoy, like watching TV or listening to music, I feel happy. But if I have to do something I dislike, I feel very uncomfortable.

제안: 回答较为完整，但可以使用更多连接词使句子更流畅，同时避免重复表达。

예시: Yes, definitely. As a student, I have to complete many assignments daily. Moreover, I need to communicate with my teammates for group projects, which requires a lot of patience.

제안: 回答中有语法和表达错误，且部分句子不完整。建议使用完整句子，注意语法，表达更清晰具体。

예시: Yes, definitely. When I was a child, I often lost my temper and didn't consider the consequences. But now, I am more patient. For example, when I face difficulties, I calm down first and then think carefully.

× if I have to wait in line for by something I really want

✓ if I have to wait in line to buy something I really want

The phrase 'for by something' is incorrect. The correct preposition here is 'to' before the verb 'buy'. This is a preposition usage error related to singular/plural context in the phrase structure.

× I I will become very impatient and angry.

✓ I will become very impatient and angry.

The repetition of 'I' is a typographical error causing sentence structure issues. Removing the extra 'I' corrects the sentence.

× It's hard to me for a long time wait.

✓ It's hard for me to wait for a long time.

The original sentence misuses prepositions and word order. The correct structure is 'hard for me to wait for a long time' to express difficulty in waiting.

× If my parents late, I will become impatient too because I it's very hard for me to wait.

✓ If my parents are late, I will become impatient too because it's very hard for me to wait.

The sentence is missing the verb 'are' after 'parents' and has an unnecessary pronoun 'I' before 'it's'. Correcting these improves clarity and grammar.

× If I doing something what I like to do, unlike watching TV or listen to music, I will feel very happy and enjoyable.

✓ If I am doing something that I like to do, like watching TV or listening to music, I will feel very happy and enjoy it.

The verb 'doing' needs an auxiliary verb 'am' to form the present continuous tense. Also, 'what' should be 'that' to introduce a relative clause. 'Unlike' is incorrectly used; 'like' is appropriate here. 'Listen' should be 'listening' to match the gerund form.

× I will very terrible.

✓ I will feel very terrible.

The sentence lacks a verb to link the subject and adjective. Adding 'feel' correctly expresses the state. 'Very terrible' is acceptable but 'feel very bad' might be more natural.

× I need to communicate with my own teammates to work on the group work, so I need a lot of patience.

✓ I need to communicate with my teammates to work on group projects, so I need a lot of patience.

'My own teammates' is redundant; 'my teammates' suffices. 'Group work' is better expressed as 'group projects' for clarity.

× I often lost my temper and didn't think about the results what I do.

✓ I often lost my temper and didn't think about the results of what I did.

The phrase 'results what I do' is incorrect. It should be 'results of what I did' to correctly link the noun 'results' with the relative clause.

× if I face some energy, things I will come down and then think of.

✓ If I face some energy-draining things, I will calm down and then think about them.

The original sentence is unclear and ungrammatical. 'Energy' should be 'energy-draining things' or similar. 'Come down' is incorrect; 'calm down' is appropriate. 'Think of' should be 'think about them' to refer back to the things.