Patience— Part 1 채점 보고서
대화
Part 1
시험관
Are you a patient person?
수험생
Yes, I think so, especially with things I enjoy. I used to have very poor handwriting, but I was determined to improve it, so I spent several years practicing Chinese calligraphy. Now most of friends say that my handwriting looks really beautiful.
시험관
What is it that makes you feel impatient?
수험생
Definitely waiting in long lines because I usually have a lot of things going on so I don't like wasting any time. Last week I waited at the bank for over 30 minutes just to deposit some money. In the end I gave up and left before it was my turn.
시험관
How do you feel when you have to do something for a long time?
수험생
Actually, I feel comfortable because I like to plan ahead. For example, if I have a big exam, I will make a plan before three months. I just have take a break on weekends.
시험관
Does your job require you to be patient?
수험생
Yes, definitely. As a program management engineer, I need to communicate with many people every day. Different team members have different working styles, so I need to be patient to coordinate them. For example, I need to wait for feedback from diverse departments before making.
시험관
Are you more patient now than when you were a child?
수험생
Yes, definitely. As a adult with more life experience and more patient now. For example, in the past I wanted a quick result, but now I understand the value of waiting. I can patiently work on long projects without getting frustrated.
평가
총점
Part 1
Are you a patient person?
점수: 85.0제안: 回答较自然且内容丰富，但部分句子结构略显复杂，建议简化表达并注意语法准确性，例如“most of friends”应为“most of my friends”。
예시: Yes, I consider myself patient, especially when doing things I enjoy. For example, I used to have poor handwriting, so I practiced Chinese calligraphy for several years. Now, many of my friends say my handwriting looks beautiful.
What is it that makes you feel impatient?
점수: 90.0제안: 回答内容具体且连贯，但可以使用更多连接词使表达更流畅，如“because”后可加“and”。同时，结尾句可更完整。
예시: I feel impatient when I have to wait in long lines because I usually have many things to do, and I don't like wasting time. For instance, last week I waited at the bank for over 30 minutes to deposit money, but I gave up and left before it was my turn.
How do you feel when you have to do something for a long time?
점수: 80.0제안: 回答表达基本清晰，但存在语法错误，如“I just have take a break”应为“I just take a break”或“I have to take a break”。建议注意时态和动词形式。
예시: I feel comfortable when I have to do something for a long time because I like to plan ahead. For example, if I have a big exam, I make a plan three months in advance and take breaks on weekends.
Does your job require you to be patient?
점수: 75.0제안: 回答内容较好，但最后一句不完整，缺少动作或结果。建议补充完整句子，并使用更准确的词汇，如“coordinate them”可改为“coordinate their work”。
예시: Yes, definitely. As a program management engineer, I communicate with many people daily. Since team members have different working styles, I need to be patient to coordinate their work. For example, I often wait for feedback from various departments before making decisions.
Are you more patient now than when you were a child?
점수: 80.0제안: 回答中存在语法错误，如“As a adult”应为“As an adult”，且“more patient now”缺少谓语。建议注意冠词使用和句子完整性。
예시: Yes, definitely. As an adult with more life experience, I am more patient now. For example, in the past I wanted quick results, but now I understand the value of waiting and can work patiently on long projects without frustration.
문법
× Now most of friends say that my handwriting looks really beautiful.
✓ Now most of my friends say that my handwriting looks really beautiful.
这里缺少了所有格限定词“my”，导致名词短语不完整。应在“friends”前加上“my”表示“我的朋友们”。
× I just have take a break on weekends.
✓ I just have to take a break on weekends.
“have”后面缺少情态动词“to”，正确结构是“have to do something”，表示必须做某事。
× As a adult with more life experience and more patient now.
✓ As an adult, I am more patient now with more life experience.
句子缺少谓语动词，且冠词使用错误。应使用“an adult”，并补充主语和谓语，使句子完整。
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