Patience— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn hơi dài dòng và có một số lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi với câu chủ đề rõ ràng, tránh lặp từ và sử dụng thì đúng. Ngoài ra, nên dùng các liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

예시: I am patient in most situations, but sometimes I get impatient, especially in the morning when I am in a hurry and my sister is slow to get ready.

제안: Bạn nên sử dụng câu trả lời ngắn gọn, rõ ràng và tránh lặp từ. Ngoài ra, cần chú ý ngữ pháp và cách dùng từ để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn.

예시: I feel impatient when I am in a hurry, especially if someone, like my sister, takes a long time to get dressed and eat breakfast while I am ready to leave.

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn có ý tốt nhưng cần cải thiện ngữ pháp và cách diễn đạt để tự nhiên hơn. Hãy sử dụng các liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp.

예시: I easily get bored when doing something for a long time, but I try to find motivation and passion to keep myself going.

제안: Bạn trả lời khá đầy đủ nhưng câu hơi dài và có lỗi nhỏ về ngữ pháp. Hãy chia câu ngắn hơn và dùng từ chính xác hơn để câu trả lời tự nhiên và hiệu quả.

예시: I am currently a student, so I need to be patient to study lessons and complete homework in order to get good grades.

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi, sử dụng thì đúng và câu ngắn gọn, mạch lạc hơn.

예시: I am more patient now than when I was a child because I have learned to manage my time better.

× I always went to go school with my sister and they are very slow

✓ I always go to school with my sister and they are very slow

The sentence incorrectly uses the past tense 'went' when describing a habitual action. Since the action is habitual, the present tense 'go' should be used.

× my sister and they are very slow

✓ my sister and she is very slow

The pronoun 'they' is incorrectly used to refer to 'my sister', which is singular. The correct singular pronoun 'she' should be used, and the verb should agree accordingly.

× the impacts that make me feel impatient is when I am in a hurry, but sometime sometimes to slow

✓ the things that make me feel impatient are when I am in a hurry, but sometimes things are too slow

The word 'impacts' is incorrectly used; 'things' is more appropriate. Also, 'sometime sometimes to slow' is ungrammatical and should be corrected to 'sometimes things are too slow'. The verb 'are' agrees with the plural subject 'things'.

× my sister they take they spend a lot of time getting dressed and having their breakfast

✓ my sister she takes a lot of time getting dressed and having her breakfast

The plural pronouns 'they' and 'their' are incorrectly used for the singular noun 'my sister'. Singular pronouns 'she' and 'her' should be used, and the verb 'takes' should be in third person singular form.

× I am a person that easily get bored

✓ I am a person that easily gets bored

The verb 'get' should be in third person singular form 'gets' to agree with the singular subject 'a person'.

× I am very boring

✓ I get very bored

'Boring' describes something that causes boredom, but the speaker wants to express their feeling, so 'bored' is correct. Also, 'get' is used to indicate becoming bored.

× we need to patient to get a high score

✓ we need to be patient to get a high score

The verb 'need' should be followed by the infinitive 'to be' before the adjective 'patient'.

× I'm not more patient out

✓ I'm not more patient now

The word 'out' is incorrect in this context and should be replaced with 'now' to indicate the present time.

× I slow like my sister

✓ I am slow like my sister

The verb 'am' is missing to link the subject 'I' with the adjective 'slow'.

× so maybe the the one that have to be impatient is my parents

✓ so maybe the ones that have to be impatient are my parents

The subject 'the one' is singular but refers to 'my parents' which is plural, so it should be 'the ones' and the verb 'have' should agree with plural subject 'ones'. Also, the verb 'are' should be used instead of 'is'.