Patience— Part 1 채점 보고서
대화
Part 1
시험관
Are you a patient person?
수험생
It depends on the situation, but you could say that I am a patient person. Many of people should be should be patient because it's a good habit.
시험관
What is it that makes you feel impatient?
수험생
I get impatient when people insist on a wrong thing, but even if that happened I I tried to stay calm and patient.
시험관
How do you feel when you have to do something for a long time?
수험생
I love to do something for a long time. This is a feature of me umm, and those are steps that I've taken to do something for a long time. First, uh, always I remember uh, what I have done, what I have struggled for and then.
시험관
Does your job require you to be patient?
수험생
Yes, it does. I work in a clothing shop, so I'm dealing with a lot of people. And then one day, and when you're dealing with people, you need to be patient and you shouldn't shout on anyone or something like that. So I see that the hardest thing is dealing with people.
시험관
Are you more patient now than when you were a child?
수험생
Yes, I learnt a lot in my life and I discovered that people uh, maybe have a bad day with their family or in their work. So I when I remember that I getting more confidence and remember how to be patient.
평가
총점
Part 1
Are you a patient person?
점수: 65.0제안: حاول أن تكون إجابتك أكثر وضوحًا وطبيعية، وتجنب التكرار والأخطاء النحوية. استخدم جملة موضوعية واضحة ثم أضف تفاصيل داعمة بشكل منطقي.
예시: Yes, I consider myself a patient person because I can stay calm in difficult situations. For example, when waiting in long lines, I try to remain composed and not get frustrated.
What is it that makes you feel impatient?
점수: 70.0제안: حاول استخدام كلمات ربط لتوضيح أفكارك بشكل أفضل، وقدم تفاصيل أكثر تحديدًا لتدعيم إجابتك.
예시: I feel impatient when people insist on something that is incorrect because it wastes time. However, I try to stay calm by reminding myself to be understanding.
How do you feel when you have to do something for a long time?
점수: 55.0제안: حاول أن تكون إجابتك أكثر تنظيماً وطبيعية، وتجنب التردد والكلمات غير الضرورية. استخدم جمل واضحة مع تفاصيل محددة تدعم إجابتك.
예시: I enjoy working on tasks for a long time because it helps me improve. For instance, I remind myself of my past achievements to stay motivated and focused.
Does your job require you to be patient?
점수: 60.0제안: حاول أن تكون إجابتك أكثر إيجازًا وتنظيمًا، واستخدم كلمات ربط لتسلسل الأفكار بشكل منطقي، وقدم أمثلة محددة.
예시: Yes, my job requires a lot of patience because I interact with many customers daily. For example, I always stay calm even when customers are upset, which helps me provide better service.
Are you more patient now than when you were a child?
점수: 60.0제안: حاول تحسين تركيب الجمل واستخدام كلمات ربط لتوضيح أفكارك، وقدم تفاصيل أكثر تحديدًا لدعم إجابتك.
예시: Yes, I am more patient now because I understand that people can have bad days due to family or work problems. This awareness helps me stay calm and patient in difficult situations.
문법
× Many of people should be should be patient because it's a good habit.
✓ Many people should be patient because it's a good habit.
The phrase 'Many of people' is incorrect because 'many' should be directly followed by a plural noun without 'of' when referring to people in general. The correct form is 'Many people'. Also, the repetition 'should be should be' is a typographical error and should be corrected to a single 'should be'.
× but even if that happened I I tried to stay calm and patient.
✓ but even if that happens, I try to stay calm and patient.
The sentence mixes past tense 'happened' and past tense 'tried' with the context implying a habitual or general action. To express a habitual reaction, present tense should be used: 'happens' and 'try'. Also, the repeated 'I' is a typographical error and should be removed.
× I love to do something for a long time.
✓ I love doing something for a long time.
The verb 'love' is commonly followed by a gerund (-ing form) when expressing enjoyment of an activity. Therefore, 'love doing' is more natural and grammatically correct than 'love to do' in this context.
× This is a feature of me umm, and those are steps that I've taken to do something for a long time.
✓ This is a feature of mine, umm, and these are steps that I've taken to do something for a long time.
The phrase 'a feature of me' is incorrect; the correct possessive form is 'a feature of mine'. Also, 'those' refers to something distant, but since the speaker is introducing steps they have taken, 'these' is more appropriate to indicate closeness.
× So I see that the hardest thing is dealing with people.
✓ So I see that the hardest thing is to deal with people.
The phrase 'the hardest thing is dealing with people' is acceptable, but 'the hardest thing is to deal with people' is more formal and fits better in this context. Both forms are grammatically correct, but the infinitive form is preferred here.
× So I when I remember that I getting more confidence and remember how to be patient.
✓ So when I remember that, I get more confident and remember how to be patient.
The phrase 'I getting' is incorrect; the correct present tense form is 'I get'. Also, 'more confidence' should be 'more confident' to use the adjective form describing the subject. Adding a comma after 'that' improves sentence clarity.
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