Patience— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không chính xác như 'painting person' thay vì 'patient person', và câu cuối không rõ nghĩa. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, rõ ràng và sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp để diễn đạt ý của mình một cách tự nhiên và hiệu quả.

예시: Actually, I'm not a very patient person because I tend to get angry easily, especially when I have to wait in long lines. It really tests my patience.

제안: Bạn sử dụng từ không chính xác như 'impinge' thay vì 'impatient' và câu cuối không rõ nghĩa. Bạn nên dùng từ vựng phù hợp và giải thích rõ ràng hơn về lý do khiến bạn mất kiên nhẫn, đồng thời tránh lỗi ngữ pháp.

예시: I feel impatient when I have to wait for a long time, especially in traffic jams because it wastes my time. Also, when people speak loudly near me, it distracts me and makes me feel annoyed.

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn quá ngắn và lặp lại ý trước đó. Bạn nên mở rộng câu trả lời bằng cách thêm chi tiết hoặc cảm xúc để câu trả lời tự nhiên và đầy đủ hơn.

예시: As I mentioned before, I feel annoyed when I have to do something for a long time because it makes me lose focus and feel tired.

제안: Câu trả lời có lỗi ngữ pháp và cấu trúc không chính xác. Bạn nên trả lời rõ ràng, sử dụng cấu trúc đúng và giải thích cụ thể hơn về việc công việc học sinh đòi hỏi sự kiên nhẫn như thế nào.

예시: Now, I'm a student, so I need to be patient when solving many difficult questions during my studies.

제안: Câu trả lời thiếu rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, sử dụng thì đúng và diễn đạt ý một cách mạch lạc hơn để thể hiện sự tiến bộ về sự kiên nhẫn của bạn.

예시: When I was a child, I often got angry when my parents didn't meet my needs. But now, as I have matured, I have become more patient and used to waiting.

× Actually, I'm not a painting person.

✓ Actually, I'm not a patient person.

The word 'painting' is incorrect here; the correct adjective is 'patient' to describe someone who can wait calmly. This is a vocabulary error affecting adjective usage.

× because I am easy to get angry, especially when I have to wait in long lines.

✓ because I get angry easily, especially when I have to wait in long lines.

The phrase 'easy to get angry' is incorrect; the correct form is 'get angry easily' to properly use the adverb modifying the verb.

× It makes me sweet, so I love it.

✓ It makes me upset, so I don't like it.

The phrase 'makes me sweet' is incorrect and does not convey the intended meaning. Likely, the student meant 'upset' or 'angry'. Also, 'so I love it' contradicts the negative feeling; corrected to 'so I don't like it' for coherence.

× I feel impinge when I have to wait for a long time, especially traffic jam because it's with my time.

✓ I feel impatient when I have to wait for a long time, especially in traffic jams because it wastes my time.

'Impinge' is incorrect; the correct adjective is 'impatient'. Also, 'traffic jam' should be plural 'traffic jams' and 'it's with my time' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'it wastes my time'.

× Also when people speak loudly near me it distract me and make me feel annoyed.

✓ Also, when people speak loudly near me, it distracts me and makes me feel annoyed.

The verbs 'distract' and 'make' need to agree with the singular subject 'it' (referring to the situation). Therefore, they should be 'distracts' and 'makes'.

× This situation often make me lose my pencil quickly.

✓ This situation often makes me lose my patience quickly.

The verb 'make' should be 'makes' to agree with the singular subject 'situation'. Also, 'lose my pencil' is likely a mistake; the correct phrase is 'lose my patience'.

× Now I'm a student so this is a require patient to solve many difficult questions.

✓ Now I'm a student, so this requires patience to solve many difficult questions.

The phrase 'this is a require patient' is incorrect. The correct form is 'this requires patience'. 'Patience' is a noun, and 'requires' is the correct verb form.

× When I try I always get angry when my parents didn't meet my needs and now when I am more matures I am getting getting used to being.

✓ When I was younger, I always got angry when my parents didn't meet my needs, but now that I am more mature, I am getting used to it.

The sentence has multiple errors: tense inconsistency ('try' should be 'was younger'), verb form ('got' past tense), adjective form ('matures' should be 'mature'), and incomplete phrase ('getting used to being' should be 'getting used to it'). Also, conjunctions and sentence structure are improved for clarity.