Patience— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 답변이 자연스럽고 효과적이지만, 문장 연결을 더 명확하게 하고, 다양한 어휘를 사용하여 표현을 풍부하게 할 수 있습니다. 예를 들어, 'because' 대신 'as'나 'since' 같은 연결어를 사용하고, 'important decisions' 대신 'crucial decisions' 같은 좀 더 구체적인 단어를 활용해 보세요.

예시: Yes, I consider myself a patient person, as I prefer to take my time when making crucial decisions. For instance, I carefully evaluate all the circumstances before selecting the best option. This approach helps me avoid mistakes and boosts my confidence in the choices I make.

제안: 답변이 명확하지만, 문법적 오류와 어색한 표현이 있습니다. 'in meeting' 대신 'in meetings'로 수정하고, 문장 간 연결을 부드럽게 하며, 좀 더 다양한 어휘를 사용해 보세요.

예시: Honestly, I feel impatient when I'm in meetings with indecisive people. This can be frustrating since making quick decisions is crucial for our work, especially when it impacts the company's revenue. Therefore, I prefer to make decisions promptly to ensure efficiency.

제안: 답변이 문법적으로 부정확하고, 문장이 중복되며, 의미 전달이 명확하지 않습니다. 간결하고 명확한 문장 구조를 사용하고, 문법 오류를 수정하며, 구체적인 예시를 추가해 보세요.

예시: I consider myself a patient person, so when I have to work on long-term projects, I can endure the process. In fact, I enjoy focusing on tasks that require sustained effort over time.

제안: 답변에 문법 오류가 있고, 문장 연결이 부자연스럽습니다. 'persistence' 대신 'be persistent'를 사용하고, 중복된 단어를 제거하며, 문장을 명확하게 다듬어 보세요.

예시: Yes, my current studies require a lot of patience because learning a new language and starting a new major is challenging. I need to stay focused and be persistent, even when progress feels slow. This process helps me develop patience and improve gradually.

제안: 답변 마지막 부분이 문법적으로 부자연스럽고, 문장이 완성되지 않았습니다. 'patience is' 대신 'patient'로 수정하고, 문장을 완성하여 명확하게 표현하세요.

예시: Yes, I'm definitely more patient now than when I was a child. When I was younger, I was quite impulsive and often acted without thinking, which sometimes caused problems. However, thanks to my mother's advice to stop and think before reacting, I have learned to be calmer and more patient.

× Honestly, I feel impatient when I'm in meeting with indecisive people.

✓ Honestly, I feel impatient when I'm in a meeting with indecisive people.

The phrase 'in meeting' is missing the article 'a' before 'meeting'. In English, singular countable nouns usually require an article. The correct phrase is 'in a meeting'.

× I'm quite a patient before, as I said right before, so when I have to do some long term project, then I can endure that kind of times and also I do that.

✓ I'm quite patient, as I said before, so when I have to do some long-term projects, I can endure that kind of time and also I do that.

The phrase 'I'm quite a patient before' is incorrect because 'patient' is an adjective here and does not need an article 'a'. 'Long term' should be hyphenated as 'long-term' when used as an adjective. 'Some long term project' should be pluralized to 'some long-term projects' to match the context. 'That kind of times' is incorrect; 'time' is uncountable here, so 'that kind of time' is correct.

× I really enjoy to do that to.

✓ I really enjoy doing that too.

The verb 'enjoy' is followed by a gerund (-ing form), not an infinitive. So 'enjoy to do' is incorrect; it should be 'enjoy doing'. Also, 'to' at the end is a typo and should be 'too' to mean 'also'.

× I need to stay focused and persistence even when I when progress feels slow.

✓ I need to stay focused and persistent even when progress feels slow.

'Persistence' is a noun, but here an adjective 'persistent' is needed to describe 'I'. Also, there is a repeated word 'when' which should be removed.

× It's helps me be develop patience and improve step by step.

✓ It helps me develop patience and improve step by step.

'It's helps' is incorrect; 'It helps' is correct because 'helps' already includes the subject 'it'. 'Be develop' is incorrect; the verb 'develop' should be in base form after 'helps me'.

× However, thanks to my mother's advice to stop and think before reacting, I have learned to be more calm and patience is.

✓ However, thanks to my mother's advice to stop and think before reacting, I have learned to be calmer and more patient.

'More calm' should be 'calmer' as the comparative form of 'calm'. 'Patience is' is incorrect; the adjective 'patient' is needed here to describe the subject. The correct phrase is 'more patient'.