Patience— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答が少し冗長で文法的な誤りもあります。より自然で効果的な表現にするために、簡潔に答え、文法を正しく使う練習をしましょう。例えば、"I'm not very patient, especially when I'm nervous. I need to practice staying calm in different situations."のように言えます。

예시: I'm not very patient, especially when I'm nervous. I need to practice staying calm in different situations.

제안: 内容が少し混乱していて、文法や語彙の誤りが多いです。質問に直接答え、具体的な理由を明確に述べる練習をしましょう。例えば、"I feel impatient when I'm tired, like after a night shift, because lack of sleep makes me nervous."のように言えます。

예시: I feel impatient when I'm tired, like after a night shift, because lack of sleep makes me nervous.

제안: 回答が少し不明瞭で、文法の誤りもあります。質問に対して明確に答え、具体的な対処法を述べると良いでしょう。例えば、"It depends on the task, but usually I need to be patient. I try to stay calm and keep going."のように言えます。

예시: It depends on the task, but usually I need to be patient. I try to stay calm and keep going.

제안: 内容は良いですが、文法と表現をより自然にすると良いです。例えば、"Definitely. As a physician, I often see difficult patients who may yell or be upset. In those cases, I need to be very patient and listen carefully."のように言えます。

예시: Definitely. As a physician, I often see difficult patients who may yell or be upset. In those cases, I need to be very patient and listen carefully.

제안: 回答は理解できますが、文法と語彙の使い方を改善しましょう。例えば、"Yes, I am. When I was a child, I couldn't wait long and got upset easily. Now, I try to stay calm."のように言えます。

예시: Yes, I am. When I was a child, I couldn't wait long and got upset easily. Now, I try to stay calm.

× Actually I'm not a patient person because I can't wait really long time especially I'm nervous when I'm nervous.

✓ Actually I'm not a patient person because I can't wait for a really long time, especially when I'm nervous.

The phrase 'wait really long time' is missing the preposition 'for' and the article 'a' before 'really long time'. The correct expression is 'wait for a really long time'. This is a common error involving quantifiers and prepositions.

× I need to practice to more calm down, especially I'm in another situation.

✓ I need to practice calming down more, especially when I'm in other situations.

The phrase 'practice to more calm down' is incorrect. After 'practice', the gerund form 'calming down' should be used. Also, 'especially I'm in another situation' should be 'especially when I'm in other situations' to correctly use the preposition and plural form.

× I'm impatient. As I mentioned, I'm when I'm in nervous, I'm working as a physician.

✓ I'm impatient. As I mentioned, when I'm nervous, I'm working as a physician.

The phrase 'I'm when I'm in nervous' is incorrect. The pronoun 'I'm' is unnecessary and 'in nervous' should be 'nervous' without 'in'. The correct phrase is 'when I'm nervous'.

× At that time I get easily to up speed up.

✓ At that time, I easily speed up.

The phrase 'I get easily to up speed up' is incorrect. The correct expression is 'I easily speed up'. The verb 'get' and the preposition 'to' are unnecessary here.

× I need more patient patience to do the same things for a long time.

✓ I need more patience to do the same things for a long time.

The phrase 'more patient patience' is redundant and incorrect. 'Patience' is a noun and 'patient' is an adjective; here, only 'patience' is needed with the quantifier 'more'.

× In that case, I tried to I make make my effort to be calm down and keep going.

✓ In that case, I try to make an effort to calm down and keep going.

The phrase 'I tried to I make make my effort to be calm down' is incorrect and contains repetition. The correct form is 'I try to make an effort to calm down'. Also, 'be calm down' should be 'calm down' without 'be'.

× That's most important things is I need to listen to them very carefully.

✓ The most important thing is I need to listen to them very carefully.

The phrase 'That's most important things' is incorrect. It should be 'The most important thing' because 'thing' is singular and requires the definite article 'the'.

× When I was a child I come.

✓ When I was a child, I came.

The verb 'come' should be in the past tense 'came' to match the past time reference 'When I was a child'.

× But now I try to make an effort to be calmed down.

✓ But now I try to make an effort to calm down.

The phrase 'be calmed down' is passive and incorrect here. The correct form is the active infinitive 'to calm down'.