Patience— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答时语法和表达不够准确，且有重复和不连贯的地方。建议简洁明了地表达观点，避免语法错误，并使用连贯的句子。

예시: To be honest, I am not a very patient person. I find it hard to concentrate on one task for a long time. For example, during my 45-minute classes, I often get distracted and use my phone secretly.

제안: 回答内容不完整且表达不清晰，缺少连贯性和具体细节。建议完整表达原因和例子，使用连接词使句子流畅。

예시: I feel impatient when I have to wait for a long time, especially in long queues or when someone is late. For example, during my summer vacation at Universal Studios, I got very tired because I had to wait a lot for each entertainment project.

제안: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题。建议使用正确的语法结构，明确表达观点，并用连接词连接句子。

예시: It depends on the activity. For example, if I like what I'm doing, such as playing the piano or watching TV, I don't mind spending a lot of time on it. However, if the task is boring, I feel impatient.

제안: 回答中有语法错误和表达不完整，且内容不够具体。建议完整表达观点，使用正确的语法，并提供具体细节。

예시: Yes, my studies require me to be patient. For example, recently I have been preparing for a difficult health exam, which needs me to concentrate for several hours every day.

제안: 回答中有许多犹豫词和不连贯表达，且内容不够具体。建议减少犹豫词，清晰表达原因，并用连贯的句子说明。

예시: Yes, I am more patient now than when I was a child. This is because I have faced many challenges in my life, which have taught me to stay calm and be persistent.

× You know, when I taking class 4545 minutes class, I always use my phone secretly.

✓ You know, when I am taking a 45-minute class, I always use my phone secretly.

这里缺少动词be的正确形式，动词taking前应加am构成现在进行时。动词+ing形式需要有适当的be动词作为助动词。

× For example, in this summer vacation, I went to the universal studio, my energy run out because.

✓ For example, this summer vacation, I went to Universal Studios, and my energy ran out because of every entertainment project.

动词run在过去时应为ran，且句子结构不完整，需用and连接两个分句。

× The every entertainment project.

✓ Every entertainment project.

冠词the与every不能同时使用，应去掉the。

× I think it's depend on the activity I'm doing.

✓ I think it depends on the activity I'm doing.

主语it为第三人称单数，谓语动词depend应加s变为depends。

× if The thing is what I like, such as playing piano or watching TV, I don't mind to spend a lot of time on it, but on the position if it is the things that boring.

✓ If the thing is something I like, such as playing the piano or watching TV, I don't mind spending a lot of time on it, but on the other hand, if it is something boring.

代词使用不当，the thing和what搭配不合适，应改为something。动词mind后接动名词形式。position用词错误，应为on the other hand。

× but on the position if it is the things that boring.

✓ but on the other hand, if it is something boring.

短语on the position用法错误，应使用常见表达on the other hand。

× One of the most important responsibility of students is focusing on study.

✓ One of the most important responsibilities of students is focusing on study.

one of后面应接复数名词responsibilities。

× these days I'm struggling with my health tax that it requires me to concentrate several hours one day to prepare for it.

✓ These days I'm struggling with my health test that requires me to concentrate for several hours a day to prepare for it.

介词使用错误，concentrate后应加介词for，表示持续时间。one day应改为a day。

× That's really.

✓ That's really hard.

句子不完整，缺少谓语或补充说明，需补充形容词hard。

× during the process of micro, umm, I face with many challenges, which requires me to stay calm and uh, uh, persistent.

✓ During the process of micro, umm, I face many challenges, which require me to stay calm and persistent.

动词face后不加介词with。动词require主语为复数challenges，谓语动词应用复数形式require。