Patience— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is relevant but lacks clarity and natural flow. Try to avoid redundancy and grammatical errors. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly and keep your answer concise within 5 sentences.

예시: No, I am not a very patient person. In my daily routine, I often get impatient, which sometimes causes problems for me. For example, I have fewer friends because of my impatience. I am working on improving this aspect of my personality.

제안: Your answer addresses the question but has grammatical mistakes and unclear expressions. Use correct sentence structures and linking words to make your answer coherent and natural.

예시: Lying is the main thing that makes me feel impatient. I find it hard to deal with people who lie and refuse to admit their mistakes. Because of this, I lose trust in them, which makes me frustrated and impatient.

제안: Your answer is somewhat confusing and lacks coherence. Avoid fragmented sentences and irrelevant details. Use linking words to connect your ideas logically and keep your answer focused on the question.

예시: When I have to do something for a long time, I usually feel frustrated and a bit anxious. For instance, while preparing for this test over the past five to six months, I sometimes felt overwhelmed. However, I try to stay calm and focused to overcome these feelings.

제안: Your answer is relevant but contains grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Use correct tenses and linking words to improve fluency and clarity.

예시: Yes, I am a physiotherapist, and my job requires a lot of patience. Since I deal with patients daily, I need to be calm and understanding to build trust and gain their confidence. Therefore, I always try to remain patient while assessing their history and treatment process.

제안: Your answer is on topic but has grammatical mistakes and awkward expressions. Use proper sentence structures and linking words to make your answer more natural and clear.

예시: Yes, over time, my impatience has decreased significantly. I have become more patient, and my friends and family have noticed this change since my childhood. I believe this improvement is due to the society and environment I live in now, which have helped me become calmer.

× I am very impatient in things my daily routine because of which I do have to get the after effects of it and I do have very less friends because of my being impatient nature.

✓ I am very impatient with things in my daily routine because of which I do have to face the after effects of it and I have very few friends because of my impatient nature.

The preposition 'in' is incorrectly used with 'impatient'; the correct preposition is 'impatient with'. Also, 'things my daily routine' lacks the preposition 'in'. 'Less' is used incorrectly with countable noun 'friends'; 'few' is the correct quantifier. 'Being impatient nature' is incorrect; it should be 'my impatient nature'. These corrections improve clarity and grammatical accuracy.

× I do have very less friends because of my being impatient nature.

✓ I have very few friends because of my impatient nature.

The phrase 'my being impatient nature' is incorrect; it should be 'my impatient nature' to correctly use the possessive pronoun and adjective form.

× Lie is the biggest thing that makes me feel impatient.

✓ Lies are the biggest thing that make me feel impatient.

'Lie' should be plural 'lies' to refer generally to untruths. Also, 'makes' should be 'make' to agree with plural subject 'lies'.

× I cannot deal with persons who are a liar and who cannot accept their mistakes.

✓ I cannot deal with people who are liars and who cannot accept their mistakes.

'Persons' is less common; 'people' is preferred. 'Who are a liar' is incorrect; it should be 'who are liars' to agree in number.

× I due to which a lack of trust also develops when the fellow meet that makes me impatient and frustrated.

✓ Because of this, a lack of trust also develops when I meet such people, which makes me impatient and frustrated.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. Reordering and adding conjunctions clarifies the meaning and corrects sentence structure.

× It's obvious a person may feel frustrated and bit anxious after doing a thing for a long time.

✓ It's obvious a person may feel frustrated and a bit anxious after doing something for a long time.

'Bit' needs the article 'a' before it. 'A thing' is vague; 'something' is more appropriate here.

× For example, I've been preparing for this. I'll test for the past five to six months.

✓ For example, I've been preparing for this test for the past five to six months.

The sentence is split incorrectly. 'I'll test' is incorrect; it should be 'this test'. Also, 'for the past' should be connected to the activity.

× I do have. I did have meltdowns during that 10 year of mine due to which I got frustrated easily.

✓ I did have meltdowns during those 10 years of mine, due to which I got frustrated easily.

'That 10 year' should be plural 'those 10 years' to indicate duration. 'I do have' is unnecessary and fragmented.

× If I will remain impatient, how will I care and make a trust with my patients And I have to gain their confidence.

✓ If I remain impatient, how will I care for and build trust with my patients? I have to gain their confidence.

'If I will remain' is incorrect; 'If I remain' is correct for conditional sentences. 'Make a trust' is incorrect; 'build trust' or 'gain trust' is correct. Also, 'care and make a trust' needs 'care for' and better phrasing.

× So I have to remain patient and assess all the history and taking process calmly.

✓ So I have to remain patient and assess all the history and the taking process calmly.

'Taking process' is unclear; adding 'the' clarifies it. Possibly 'taking process' refers to 'treatment process' or 'procedure' but kept as original with article correction.

× I my impatient nature has also gone down to lowest degree.

✓ My impatient nature has also gone down to the lowest degree.

The phrase 'I my impatient nature' is incorrect; 'My impatient nature' is correct. Also, 'lowest degree' needs the definite article 'the'.

× I become more patient and my fellow friends and my family also say that I have drastically changed since childhood.

✓ I have become more patient and my close friends and my family also say that I have drastically changed since childhood.

'Become' should be 'have become' to indicate present perfect tense. 'Fellow friends' is redundant; 'close friends' or just 'friends' is better.