Patience— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清的问题，例如“get known”应为“get annoyed”或“get impatient”，且“patients”应为“patience”。建议注意单词拼写和用法，避免表达模糊。

예시: I'm not a very patient person because I want things to be done quickly. For example, when I'm busy studying, I often get impatient. However, I am trying to improve my patience by reminding myself to stay calm.

제안: 回答内容较为具体，但开头“Then”用词不当，且“angry by myself”应为“angry with myself”。建议使用更合适的连接词和正确的介词搭配。

예시: When I try to learn a new skill and practice many times but still can't do it well, I feel very impatient and angry with myself. For example, when I was learning to play the piano, I wanted to improve quickly, but it took a long time to get better, which made me frustrated.

제안: 回答较为完整，表达清晰。建议避免句子开头用“But”，可以用更自然的连接词使表达更流畅。

예시: When I have to do something for a long time, I usually start to feel quite impatient and frustrated because it makes me lose interest and motivation. For example, if I have to study for hours without taking a break, I begin to feel tired and unhappy.

제안: 回答内容完整且结构合理。建议可以增加一些连接词使句子更连贯，例如使用“therefore”或“so”。

예시: I don't have a job because I am a student, but my studies require me to be very patient. For example, I often have to read and write the same material many times, which can be quite boring. Therefore, being patient helps me understand the content better and improve myself.

제안: 回答中存在语法错误，如“complain”应为“complaints”，“a more demanding responsibilities”应为“more demanding responsibilities”。建议注意名词单复数和词汇使用的准确性。

예시: No, I'm actually less patient now than when I was a child because back then I didn't have many words and could express my complaints freely. However, now I have more demanding responsibilities and problems to think about, so I often feel impatient.

× when I'm busy with study, I often get known.

✓ when I'm busy with study, I often get annoyed.

这里的 'get known' 是错误的表达，应该是 'get annoyed' 表示感到烦恼。'get known' 意思是被认识，不符合语境。

× I'm trying to improve my patients by reminding myself.

✓ I'm trying to improve my patience by reminding myself.

这里 'patients' 是复数名词，意思是病人，应该用 'patience' 表示耐心。

× This made me feel angry by myself.

✓ This made me feel angry with myself.

表达 '对自己生气' 应该用 'angry with myself'，而不是 'angry by myself'。

× I have a more demanding responsibilities and problem to think about, so I often feel impatient.

✓ I have more demanding responsibilities and problems to think about, so I often feel impatient.

'a more demanding responsibilities and problem' 中 'a' 不应该和复数名词 'responsibilities' 一起使用，且 'problem' 应该用复数形式 'problems'。

× I have a more demanding responsibilities and problem to think about, so I often feel impatient.

✓ I have more demanding responsibilities and problems to think about, so I often feel impatient.

名词复数形式使用错误，'responsibilities' 和 'problems' 应该用复数形式，且不需要冠词 'a'。