Patience— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 質問に対して直接的な答えを簡潔に述べ、その後に理由を具体的に説明しましょう。また、'And she?'のような不自然な表現は避け、文法的に正しい文章を心がけてください。

예시: No, I am not a patient person because I am a third-year high school student and I enjoy my school life a lot, so I often get impatient when I have to wait.

제안: 答えが不明瞭で文法的にも誤りがあります。具体的に何が原因で焦るのかを明確にし、文法的に正しい文章で説明しましょう。

예시: I feel impatient when I have to wait for a long time because I have many things to do and I want to use my time efficiently.

제안: 感情を表現する際に適切な形容詞を使い、理由を明確に述べましょう。また、文法的な誤りを修正し、意味が通る文章にしてください。

예시: I feel bored when I have to do something for a long time because it is difficult to stay focused, so sometimes I feel like taking a short break.

제안: 質問の意味を理解し、正しい単語と文法で答えましょう。'patent'は誤りで、'patient'が正しいです。また、内容も明確にしてください。

예시: No, my job does not require me to be patient because I am a third-year high school student and I do not have a job yet.

제안: 答えが不明瞭で文法的に誤りがあります。比較を明確にし、忍耐の重要性について具体的に説明しましょう。

예시: Yes, I am more patient now than when I was a child because I have learned that patience is important in achieving my goals.

× Maybe no I'm not patient person because I'm a third year high school student and I enjoy school life so I can't. And she?

✓ Maybe no, I'm not a patient person because I'm a third-year high school student and I enjoy school life, so I can't be. And you?

The sentence lacks the article 'a' before 'patient person' and 'third year' should be hyphenated as 'third-year' when used as an adjective. The phrase 'so I can't' is incomplete and unclear; it should be 'so I can't be' to complete the thought. 'And she?' is incorrect as a question; it should be 'And you?' to ask the examiner. Pronouns must be used correctly to refer to the right person.

× I think makes my feeling impatient is experience. I undertakes some experience so we have encouraged.

✓ I think what makes me feel impatient is experience. I have undertaken some experiences, so we have been encouraged.

The original sentence has incorrect word order and verb forms. 'Makes my feeling impatient' should be 'makes me feel impatient' to correctly express the subject and verb. 'I undertakes' is incorrect; the correct form is 'I have undertaken' for past experience. 'Some experience' should be plural 'some experiences' if referring to multiple events. The phrase 'so we have encouraged' is unclear; 'we have been encouraged' is more appropriate.

× I feel boring because it is difficult to me to do long time so I sleep when it's due.

✓ I feel bored because it is difficult for me to do something for a long time, so I sleep when it's due.

'Boring' describes something that causes boredom, but the speaker should use 'bored' to describe their feeling. 'Difficult to me' should be 'difficult for me' to use the correct preposition. 'Do long time' is incomplete; it should be 'do something for a long time'. The sentence is also missing commas for clarity.

× No my job isn't need a patent because I'm third year high school student so school is not a bad dance need.

✓ No, my job doesn't need patience because I'm a third-year high school student, so school does not require it.

'Isn't need' is incorrect; the correct modal verb construction is 'doesn't need'. 'Patent' is a misspelling of 'patience'. 'Third year' should be hyphenated as 'third-year'. The phrase 'school is not a bad dance need' is unclear and likely a mishearing or mistranslation; it should be 'school does not require it' to make sense.

× Yes, I'm up at the end when I'm a kid so it is important for me to anything or patience.

✓ Yes, I was impatient when I was a kid, so it is important for me to have patience in everything.

'I'm up at the end' is incorrect and unclear; it should be 'I was impatient'. 'When I'm a kid' should be past tense 'when I was a kid'. 'To anything or patience' is unclear; it should be 'to have patience in everything' to express the intended meaning. Adjectives and verb tenses must be used correctly to convey the right meaning.