Patience— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答中存在重复和语法错误，表达不够流畅。建议简洁明了地回答问题，避免重复，并使用正确的时态和词汇。

예시: Yes, I consider myself a patient person. For instance, when I wait in line at the canteen, I remain calm and don't rush.

제안: 回答中语法和表达不够准确，句子结构混乱。建议使用更清晰的句子结构，表达原因时使用连接词。

예시: I feel impatient when waiting for my final exam results because they are important for my success, and I want to know my scores as soon as possible.

제안: 回答中有词汇错误和表达不清晰的问题。建议使用准确的词汇表达感受，并用连接词使句子更连贯。

예시: When I have to do something for a long time, I sometimes feel distracted. However, I usually listen to music with headphones, which helps me relax and concentrate better.

제안: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不够清晰。建议简洁表达，避免重复，并用连接词说明原因。

예시: Yes, my studies require patience because I need to review my lessons daily, and each subject takes several months to complete.

제안: 回答中句子不完整且语法错误较多，表达混乱。建议使用完整句子，清晰表达对比，并避免重复。

예시: Yes, I am more patient now than when I was a child. Back then, I was impatient, especially when I wanted candy or toys from my parents, but now I am much calmer.

× For example, when I when I stay in a line in the canteen to order some food, I will not be very hurry.

✓ For example, when I am standing in a line in the canteen to order some food, I will not be in a hurry.

这里需要使用现在进行时态，表示正在排队的动作，应该用“am standing”而不是“stay”。另外，“hurry”是名词时需要加介词“in a hurry”。

× I will not be very hurry.

✓ I will not be in a hurry.

“hurry”作为名词时需要用介词短语“in a hurry”，不能直接用“very hurry”。

× Yes, I think it is very I, I think it is a patient performance.

✓ Yes, I think it is very good, I think it is a patient performance.

“very”后面应接形容词或副词，这里缺少形容词，需补充合适的形容词如“good”。

× Maybe when my school is going to tell my mother of the final exam, I will be impatient because I think the mark is very significant for me and I will be very successful and want to know the mark more earlier.

✓ Maybe when my school is going to tell my mother about the final exam, I will be impatient because I think the mark is very significant for me and I want to be very successful and want to know the mark earlier.

“tell”后面应接介词“about”而不是“of”。“more earlier”是错误的比较级表达，应直接用“earlier”。另外，“I will be very successful”时态不合适，应改为“want to be very successful”。

× Maybe I'll feel just zoom out.

✓ Maybe I'll just feel zoned out.

“zoom out”是错误表达，正确表达应为“zoned out”，表示走神。

× I usually will wear my headphones and listen to music and with the music I will feel very relaxed and more focal fo con concentrate on the task I am doing.

✓ I usually wear my headphones and listen to music, and with the music, I feel very relaxed and more focused to concentrate on the task I am doing.

“will”在习惯动作中不常用，应去掉。短语“more focal fo con concentrate”错误，应改为“more focused to concentrate”。

× My I'm now studying the university and I have to revise the class every day as either it is a long term study process, I have to study a subject in three months or longer.

✓ I am now studying at the university and I have to review the classes every day as it is a long-term study process; I have to study a subject for three months or longer.

“My I'm”错误，应为“I am”。“studying the university”应为“studying at the university”。“revise the class”应为“review the classes”。“either”用法错误，应去掉。

× I have to revise the class every day as either it is a long term study process, I have to study a subject in three months or longer.

✓ I have to review the classes every day as it is a long-term study process; I have to study a subject for three months or longer.

“class”应为复数“classes”，因为通常指多门课程。

× He was impatient. People, especially when I want something like some candy or some toys. Ask that from my parents.

✓ I was impatient, especially when I wanted something like candy or toys and asked my parents for it.

“He was impatient”与上下文不符，应为“I was impatient”。“Ask that from my parents”语法错误，应改为“asked my parents for it”。

× I have been no patient, but now I really don't care about it.

✓ I was not patient, but now I really don't care about it.

“have been no patient”表达错误，应为“I was not patient”。