Patience— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is clear and relevant, but it could be more natural and concise. Avoid repeating similar ideas and try to use linking words to connect your points smoothly.

예시: Yes, I consider myself a patient person because it helps me stay calm and think clearly in difficult situations.

제안: Your answer has some grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Try to use correct sentence structures and be more specific. Also, avoid redundancy and use linking words to improve coherence.

예시: I usually feel impatient when people arrive very late, especially if they are more than two hours late, as it disrupts my plans.

제안: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical mistakes. Try to express your ideas more clearly and directly. Use linking words to connect your thoughts and provide specific examples.

예시: It depends on the task; if it's important or interesting, I can be patient and focus for a long time.

제안: Your answer is relevant but could be more fluent and grammatically correct. Use linking words to explain why patience is important in your job and provide specific details.

예시: Yes, my part-time job requires a lot of patience because unexpected situations often arise, so I need to stay calm and handle them carefully.

제안: Your answer is good but could be improved by adding linking words and more specific details to explain how you have become more patient.

예시: Yes, I am definitely more patient now than when I was a child because I have learned to control my emotions and stay calm in stressful situations.

× Well, most of the time people who arrive at late, even too late for about two hours, I'm afraid I can't have fully patience.

✓ Well, most of the time people who arrive late, even too late by about two hours, I'm afraid I can't have full patience.

The phrase 'arrive at late' is incorrect; 'arrive late' is the correct form without the preposition 'at'. Also, 'fully patience' is incorrect because 'patience' is an uncountable noun and should be preceded by 'full' as an adjective, not 'fully' which is an adverb. The phrase 'too late for about two hours' is awkward; 'too late by about two hours' is clearer.

× Well, most of the time people who arrive at late, even too late for about two hours, I'm afraid I can't have fully patience.

✓ Well, most of the time people who arrive late, even too late by about two hours, I'm afraid I can't have full patience.

The preposition 'at' is incorrectly used before 'late'. The correct phrase is 'arrive late' without 'at'. Also, 'for about two hours' is not the best preposition here; 'by about two hours' better expresses the delay duration.

× Well, most of the time people who arrive at late, even too late for about two hours, I'm afraid I can't have fully patience.

✓ Well, most of the time people who arrive late, even too late by about two hours, I'm afraid I can't have full patience.

'Patience' is an uncountable noun and should be modified by 'full' (an adjective) rather than 'fully' (an adverb). Using 'fully patience' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'full patience'.

× Well, it might depend on the types of things and the quality of it.

✓ Well, it might depend on the types of things and their quality.

The pronoun 'it' is incorrectly used to refer back to 'types of things', which is plural. The correct pronoun should be 'their' to agree in number with the plural noun.

× For example, if the things that deserve I do it, I definitely have fully patience.

✓ For example, if the things deserve it, I definitely have full patience.

The phrase 'things that deserve I do it' is ungrammatical and unclear. It should be simplified to 'things deserve it'. Also, 'fully patience' is incorrect; 'full patience' is the correct form as 'patience' is uncountable and modified by an adjective, not an adverb.

× Well, at the part time job, patience is a crucial factor.

✓ Well, in the part-time job, patience is a crucial factor.

The preposition 'at' is not appropriate here; 'in' is used to indicate being within a job or role. Also, 'part time' should be hyphenated as 'part-time' when used as an adjective.

× You know there everything could happen, so I had to stay calm.

✓ You know, there everything could happen, so I have to stay calm.

The pronoun 'there' is correctly used as an expletive here, but the tense inconsistency between 'could happen' (past modal) and 'had to stay calm' (past tense) conflicts with the present context. Changing 'had to' to 'have to' maintains present relevance.

× You know there everything could happen, so I had to stay calm.

✓ You know, there everything could happen, so I have to stay calm.

The phrase 'had to stay calm' is in the past tense, but the context suggests a general truth or habitual action, so present tense 'have to stay calm' is more appropriate.