Patience— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答时应避免语法错误，表达更自然流畅。例如，“I have received that feedback from many people”会更准确。

예시: Yes, I consider myself a patient person, and many people have told me the same.

제안: 回答内容不够清晰，语法和表达混乱。建议简洁明了地说明让你不耐烦的具体原因，并使用连接词使句子连贯。

예시: I feel impatient when things take longer than expected because I like to finish tasks quickly and move on.

제안: 回答较好，但可以增加具体细节和连接词，使表达更丰富和连贯。

예시: When I have to do something for a long time, I try to stay positive and focus on the benefits, so I can enjoy the process more.

제안: 回答中有语法错误且表达不清晰。建议直接回答问题，并用具体例子说明工作中是否需要耐心。

예시: My job requires creativity and positivity, but it doesn't demand much patience because tasks are usually quick and dynamic.

제안: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不连贯。建议用完整句子清楚表达对比，并使用连接词。

예시: Yes, I am more patient now than when I was a child. Back then, I used to rush through meals, and my mother often reminded me to slow down.

× I think I'm a patient person and I got that reviews a lot from other people.

✓ I think I'm a patient person and I got those reviews a lot from other people.

这里'reviews'是复数，前面的指示代词应使用复数形式'those'，而不是单数'that'。

× I think I don't have so many emotions about things when people tell me their stories, I always have passion to hear without any judgmental and in when I saw situations, I always believe in myself I guess.

✓ I think I don't have so many emotions about things when people tell me their stories. I always have the passion to listen without any judgment, and when I see situations, I always believe in myself, I guess.

原句中'passion to hear'应改为'passion to listen'，更符合英语习惯；'judgmental'用作形容词，需改为名词'judgment'；'in when I saw situations'结构混乱，应改为'and when I see situations'。

× My job require me creative modern patient.

✓ My job requires me to be creative, modern, and patient.

'job'是单数，谓语动词应使用第三人称单数形式'requires'；'require me creative modern patient'结构不正确，应补充不定式'to be'并用逗号分隔形容词。

× My job require me creative modern patient.

✓ My job requires me to be creative, modern, and patient.

'patient'应作为形容词使用，且多个形容词之间需用逗号分隔。

× I guys became more patient.

✓ I guess I became more patient.

'I guys'是错误表达，应为'I guess'，表示'我猜'。

× Now when I was a kid I have no patient at all.

✓ When I was a kid, I had no patience at all.

描述过去的情况，谓语动词应使用过去时'had'；'patient'是形容词，名词形式应为'patience'。

× I always so. Rush to eat.

✓ I was always so rushed to eat.

'so'后面缺少形容词，且'rush'应为过去分词'rushed'，表示被动或状态；句子结构需调整为完整句。