Patience— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: حاول تحسين الطلاقة والوضوح في إجاباتك، وتجنب التكرار والكلمات غير الواضحة. استخدم جمل كاملة ومنظمة مع ربط الأفكار بشكل منطقي.

예시: Yes, I consider myself a patient person because I have many goals that require time and effort. For example, I am preparing for an important exam, so I need to be patient to study consistently and achieve success.

제안: حاول أن تكون أكثر وضوحًا وتنظيمًا في إجابتك، واستخدم كلمات مناسبة لتوضيح سبب شعورك بعدم الصبر مع أمثلة محددة.

예시: I feel impatient when I have difficult exams because I spend a lot of time studying, reading, listening, and writing, and I want to see the results of my hard work soon.

제안: حاول التعبير عن مشاعرك بشكل أكثر دقة واستخدم تراكيب لغوية صحيحة مع ربط الأفكار بشكل منطقي.

예시: I feel tired and find it hard to concentrate when I have to do something for a long time, especially reading, because I want to improve my reading skills and get better marks.

제안: حاول تقديم إجابة واضحة ومباشرة مع شرح كيف يتطلب عملك الصبر، واستخدم جمل كاملة ومنظمة.

예시: Yes, my job requires me to be patient because I have a clear vision and I spend a lot of time reading books to improve my skills and achieve success.

제안: حاول تنظيم أفكارك بشكل أفضل واستخدم جمل واضحة للتعبير عن الفرق بين صبرك الآن وصبرك في الماضي.

예시: I am more patient now than when I was a child because I have many responsibilities, and I understand the importance of being patient to handle them well.

× I have many works and I have goals

✓ I have much work and I have goals

The word 'work' is an uncountable noun and should not be pluralized as 'works' when referring to tasks or job-related activities. Use 'much work' instead of 'many works'.

× I must be patient for uh, for cheap my goals and become successful

✓ I must be patient to achieve my goals and become successful

The phrase 'for cheap my goals' is incorrect. The correct preposition after 'patient' when expressing purpose is 'to'. Also, 'cheap' is incorrect here; the intended word is 'achieve'.

× I have exam, eye exercise exam and uh, I must be patient to uh achieve my goal

✓ I have an exam, an eye exercise exam, and I must be patient to achieve my goal

The noun 'exam' is countable and requires an article 'an' when singular. Also, listing multiple exams requires proper article usage.

× I have honest exams

✓ I have important exams

The word 'honest' is incorrectly used here; likely the intended adjective is 'important'. Also, 'exams' is plural and correctly used.

× I don't, I must be patient and very, uh, because I, uh, I work hard and I spend a lot of my time to reading books and listening and writing

✓ I must be patient because I work hard and spend a lot of my time reading books, listening, and writing

The phrase 'I don't, I must be patient and very' is unclear and incorrect. Also, after 'spend time', the verb should be in the '-ing' form, so 'reading' instead of 'to reading'.

× I spend a lot of my time to reading books and listening and writing

✓ I spend a lot of my time reading books, listening, and writing

After 'spend time', the verb should be in the gerund form (-ing), not the infinitive 'to reading'.

× I must be patient for that to success

✓ I must be patient for that to succeed

The verb 'success' is a noun; the correct verb form is 'succeed'.

× I feel very hard, I feel tired because I have the eyes being asked in a lot of the time to focus on reading

✓ I feel it is very hard, I feel tired because I have to use my eyes a lot of the time to focus on reading

The phrase 'I have the eyes being asked' is incorrect. The correct expression is 'I have to use my eyes'. Also, 'a lot of the time' is better than 'in a lot of the time'.

× because I didn't get good mark in reading

✓ because I didn't get a good mark in reading

The countable noun 'mark' requires an article 'a' when singular.

× Now I uh, spend a lot of time tomorrow at morning and evening to reading books

✓ Now I spend a lot of time in the morning and evening reading books

The phrase 'tomorrow at morning and evening' is incorrect. 'Tomorrow' conflicts with 'now'. Also, 'in the morning and evening' is the correct prepositional phrase. After 'spend time', use gerund 'reading' instead of 'to reading'.

× Two successful. I must be patient for that

✓ To be successful, I must be patient

The phrase 'Two successful' is incorrect; it should be 'To be successful'.

× I have a vision. I spent a lot of my time in reading books

✓ I have a vision. I spend a lot of my time reading books

The verb tense should be present 'spend' to match the present tense 'have'. Also, after 'spend time', use gerund 'reading' instead of 'in reading'.

× When I was a child, I, I didn't remember if I vision or not by

✓ When I was a child, I didn't remember if I had a vision or not

The verb 'vision' is a noun; the correct phrase is 'had a vision'. Also, 'by' at the end is unnecessary.

× now I am, uh, very patient because I have many responsibilities and I must be patient now and I, I, I am

✓ Now I am very patient because I have many responsibilities and I must be patient now

The repetition 'I, I, I am' is unnecessary and should be removed for clarity.