Patience— Part 1 채점 보고서
대화
Part 1
시험관
Are you a patient person?
수험생
Yes, I am a patient person. All of my friends say that I am patient. I suppose it may be because when I teach them, if they they are not understand, I will teach them again and again.
시험관
What is it that makes you feel impatient?
수험생
If others understand something slowly, I will feel impatient. For example, I am an influencer so I teach my father some skills about how to be an influencer, but he always can't understand so I feel really angry.
시험관
How do you feel when you have to do something for a long time?
수험생
To be honest, I don't have any emotions. If the things need me, I spend a long time on it. I'm willing to keep doing it.
시험관
Does your job require you to be patient?
수험생
Yes, my job really need me keep very patient. I suppose it's meant because my leader leaders are stupid. If I need to tell them something, I need to say it again and again.
시험관
Are you more patient now than when you were a child?
수험생
Yes, I am more patient now than when I was a kid. I think it may be because I experienced something which makes me feel angry. So now I am develop a patient lifestyle.
평가
총점
Part 1
Are you a patient person?
점수: 70.0제안: 回答较为自然，但存在语法错误和重复，建议避免重复表达，注意语法准确性，并使用更丰富的词汇。
예시: Yes, I consider myself a patient person. My friends often tell me that I am very understanding, especially when I help them learn new things. For instance, if they don't grasp a concept immediately, I calmly explain it multiple times until they understand.
What is it that makes you feel impatient?
점수: 65.0제안: 表达情绪时用词较简单且重复，建议使用更准确的词汇表达情绪，并避免重复。
예시: I tend to feel impatient when people take a long time to understand something. For example, as an influencer, I try to teach my father some skills, but when he struggles to grasp them, I sometimes get frustrated.
How do you feel when you have to do something for a long time?
점수: 60.0제안: 回答不够自然，表达不流畅，建议使用更自然的表达方式，并丰富内容。
예시: Honestly, I don't get bored or frustrated when I have to work on something for a long time. If a task requires my attention, I'm willing to dedicate as much time as needed to complete it.
Does your job require you to be patient?
점수: 50.0제안: 回答中有不礼貌用语，影响表达效果，建议避免使用贬义词，保持礼貌，同时注意语法和表达的连贯性。
예시: Yes, my job requires a lot of patience. Sometimes I have to explain things multiple times to my supervisors to ensure they understand, which can be challenging but I try to stay calm.
Are you more patient now than when you were a child?
점수: 65.0제안: 表达不够准确，语法错误较多，建议注意时态和句子结构，使用更自然的表达。
예시: Yes, I am definitely more patient now than I was as a child. I believe this is because I have gone through experiences that taught me to control my anger and adopt a more patient attitude.
문법
× If they they are not understand, I will teach them again and again.
✓ If they do not understand, I will teach them again and again.
这里的错误是主语是复数的"they"，谓语动词需要用助动词"do"来构成否定句，不能直接用"are not understand"，正确用法是"do not understand"。
× If the things need me, I spend a long time on it.
✓ If the things need me, I spend a long time doing it.
动词"spend"后面应接动名词形式表示花费时间做某事，不能直接用介词"on it"，正确表达是"spend a long time doing it"。
× Yes, my job really need me keep very patient.
✓ Yes, my job really needs me to keep very patient.
主语"my job"是单数，谓语动词应使用第三人称单数形式"needs"，同时"need me keep"结构不正确，应为"needs me to keep"。
× I suppose it's meant because my leader leaders are stupid.
✓ I suppose it's meant because my leaders are stupid.
"leader leaders"重复且不正确，应为复数"leaders"，且句子中"meant"用法不当，建议改为"I suppose it's because my leaders are stupid."。
× So now I am develop a patient lifestyle.
✓ So now I am developing a patient lifestyle.
现在进行时态中，动词应使用现在分词形式，"develop"应改为"developing"。
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