Patience— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự tự nhiên và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, làm giảm tính hiệu quả. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, tránh lặp từ và sử dụng câu ngắn gọn, rõ ràng hơn.

예시: I don't consider myself a very patient person because I find it hard to wait for others for a long time, which often makes me feel frustrated.

제안: Bạn nên sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và liên kết các ý bằng từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn. Ngoài ra, hãy cung cấp chi tiết cụ thể và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp.

예시: I feel impatient when I have to wait a long time for someone, for example, when I visit a friend and wait for her to get ready, it makes me feel annoyed and sometimes I don't want to stay.

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn cần rõ ràng hơn và tránh lặp từ. Hãy sử dụng các từ nối để liên kết ý và diễn đạt cảm xúc một cách tự nhiên hơn.

예시: It depends on the task; if I enjoy it, I feel excited and don't mind spending a long time on it. However, if it's something I dislike, doing it for a long time makes me feel quite angry.

제안: Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp và rõ ràng hơn, tránh lặp từ và sử dụng cấu trúc câu đúng ngữ pháp để câu trả lời tự nhiên và hiệu quả hơn.

예시: Yes, my job requires a lot of patience, and I realize that I need to improve this skill to perform better.

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự hoàn chỉnh và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp. Hãy trả lời trực tiếp, sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và tránh lặp từ để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn.

예시: I don't think I am more patient now than when I was a child because back then, I could play all day without waiting. But now, I often have to wait for many things, which tests my patience.

× I don't know somebody tell about me, but I think I am not a patient person.

✓ I don't know what somebody says about me, but I think I am not a patient person.

The phrase 'somebody tell about me' is incorrect because 'tell' requires an object and the correct expression is 'somebody says about me' or 'what somebody says about me'. The pronoun usage is incorrect here.

× I can, I, I can't wait somebody very long time.

✓ I can't wait for somebody for a very long time.

The verb 'wait' requires the preposition 'for' before the object. Also, 'somebody' should be preceded by 'for' to indicate waiting for someone.

× I can say awaiting for the people in the long time.

✓ I can say waiting for people for a long time.

The word 'awaiting' is a verb form that does not take 'for' after it. The correct verb is 'waiting for'. Also, 'in the long time' should be 'for a long time'.

× Like when I and my friend go to the coffee and I go to her home and wait her very long, I can feel a bad mood and I don't want to go.

✓ Like when my friend and I go to a coffee shop and I go to her home and wait for her for a very long time, I can feel bad mood and I don't want to go.

The order of pronouns should be 'my friend and I'. 'Go to the coffee' is incorrect; it should be 'go to a coffee shop'. 'Wait her' is incorrect; it should be 'wait for her'. Also, 'a bad mood' should be 'bad mood' or 'feel bad'.

× Uh, I can say it is dependent in the thing I do.

✓ Uh, I can say it depends on the thing I do.

The phrase 'dependent in' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'depends on'.

× Uh, if I do the thing, that thing I very like are very excited for me.

✓ Uh, if I do the thing that I really like, I am very excited.

The sentence has incorrect pronoun and verb forms. 'That thing I very like' should be 'that I really like'. 'Are very excited for me' should be 'I am very excited'.

× but the thing I don't like, I need to do is very long time.

✓ But the thing I don't like that I need to do takes a very long time.

The sentence structure is incorrect. 'Is very long time' should be 'takes a very long time' to express duration.

× I think now every job need to be patient and my job needs require me patience and I think I need to improve it.

✓ I think now every job needs patience and my job requires me to be patient, and I think I need to improve it.

Subject-verb agreement errors: 'every job need' should be 'every job needs'. 'Needs require me patience' is incorrect; it should be 'requires me to be patient'.

× MMM I think no when I was trying I don't need to do anything I can play all day so I don't have a thing make me impatient.

✓ MMM I think no, when I was a child I didn't need to do anything; I could play all day so I didn't have anything that made me impatient.

Incorrect verb tenses and pronouns: 'when I was trying' should be 'when I was a child'. 'I don't need' should be 'I didn't need'. 'I can play' should be 'I could play'. 'I don't have a thing make me impatient' should be 'I didn't have anything that made me impatient'.