Patience— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Сиз жавобингизни аниқ ва тўғри ифодалашингиз керак. Кўп такрорланишлардан ва тўхталишлардан қочинг. Жавобингизни қисқа ва мазмунли қилиб, сабаблар ёки мисоллар билан бойитинг.

예시: No, I am not a very patient person because I dislike waiting for others. For example, when I go out with friends, I often get frustrated if they are late.

제안: Жавобингизни тўғри ва аниқ ифодалашга ҳаракат қилинг. Қўшимча маълумотларни боғловчи сўзлар билан бириктиринг ва аниқ мисоллар келтиринг.

예시: I feel impatient mainly when my friends or relatives are late. For instance, if someone arrives late to a meeting, I find it hard to stay calm because I dislike waiting.

제안: Жавобингизни қисқа ва аниқ қилиб ифодалашга ҳаракат қилинг. Қўшимча маълумотларни боғловчи сўзлардан фойдаланинг ва мисоллар билан бойитинг.

예시: I feel frustrated and impatient when I have to do tasks that take a long time, such as writing essays or doing homework, because I prefer quick results.

제안: Жавобингизни тўлиқ ва аниқ қилиб ифодалашга ҳаракат қилинг. Грамматик хатоларни тузатинг ва сўзларни тўғри танланг. Қўшимча маълумотлар билан жавобингизни бойитинг.

예시: Yes, my job requires a lot of patience because teaching lessons demands concentration and time. Sometimes, I feel restless and find it difficult to stay focused for long periods.

제안: Жавобингизни аниқ ва тўғри ифодалашга ҳаракат қилинг. Қўшимча мисоллар билан жавобингизни бойитинг ва боғловчи сўзлардан фойдаланинг.

예시: Yes, I am more patient now than when I was a child. For example, in stressful situations at work, I have learned to stay calm and think carefully before reacting.

× So actually I, uh, really not the patient person because, uh, I don't have a patient, uh, for, to do anything or the do wait for someone.

✓ So actually I, uh, am really not a patient person because, uh, I don't have patience, uh, to do anything or to wait for someone.

The word 'patient' is an adjective here, but 'patient' as a noun means a sick person. The correct noun form for the quality is 'patience'. Also, 'the patient person' should be 'a patient person' because it is a general statement about a type of person, not a specific one.

× And actually we, we, when we go to the somewhere, I don't wait to the, uh, someone for.

✓ And actually, when we go somewhere, I don't wait for someone.

The preposition 'to' is incorrectly used with 'wait'. The correct preposition is 'for'. Also, 'to the somewhere' is incorrect; 'somewhere' does not need 'to' or 'the'.

× Total the trust and my friends or my relations late.

✓ When my friends or my relatives are late.

The phrase 'Total the trust' is unclear and likely incorrect. 'Relations' should be 'relatives' to mean family members. Also, 'are' is needed for plural subjects 'friends' and 'relatives'.

× When they are late it makes me feel impatient because I'm not very patient person and I don't find I find it difficult to wait for others.

✓ When they are late, it makes me feel impatient because I'm not a very patient person and I find it difficult to wait for others.

The phrase 'not very patient person' needs the article 'a' before 'very patient person' because it is singular countable noun.

× Words, they come in slow situations.

✓ When things happen slowly, it makes me feel impatient.

The original sentence is unclear and ungrammatical. It seems to mean that slow situations cause impatience. The correction clarifies the meaning and corrects sentence structure.

× It makes me frustrated when I have to do something for a long time, for example, the writing the essays or to do something homework.

✓ It makes me frustrated when I have to do something for a long time, for example, writing essays or doing homework.

The article 'the' before 'writing the essays' is incorrect. Also, 'to do something homework' is incorrect; 'doing homework' is the correct gerund form. Prepositions and articles are corrected.

× Yes, of course my lessons requires my lesson requires a lot of concentration and time.

✓ Yes, of course, my lessons require a lot of concentration and time.

The subject 'lessons' is plural, so the verb should be 'require' not 'requires'. Also, the repetition 'my lessons requires my lesson requires' is corrected to a single phrase.

× This makes me feel restless and I often find it hard to stay focused for extended periods and also when I do my homework I very.

✓ This makes me feel restless and I often find it hard to stay focused for extended periods. Also, when I do my homework, I feel very restless.

The original sentence is incomplete and lacks a verb at the end. The correction completes the sentence and improves clarity.

× OK uh yes, I believe I'm more patient now than I was a child.

✓ OK, uh, yes, I believe I'm more patient now than I was as a child.

The phrase 'than I was a child' is missing the preposition 'as' to compare states or roles. 'As a child' is the correct expression.

× Growing up I used to get frustrated easily when things didn't go my way, but with time and experience I have learned to stay calm and think things do, for example in stressful situations at work.

✓ Growing up, I used to get frustrated easily when things didn't go my way, but with time and experience, I have learned to stay calm and think things through, for example, in stressful situations at work.

The phrase 'think things do' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'think things through'. Commas are added for clarity and correct sentence structure.