Patience— Part 1 채점 보고서
대화
Part 1
시험관
Are you a patient person?
수험생
Yes, I'm a patient person. For example, I am usually patient to wait in the line to check out at the counter. 5 minutes or even more time is OK for me to wait for. I'm not afraid of waiting.
시험관
What is it that makes you feel impatient?
수험생
If an emergency occurs or something is urgent for people to act quickly, they will feel impatient. For example, the departure time of an airplane is fixed. People will be impatient when they are almost late for the plane because that means they will waste the money spent on the tickets.
시험관
How do you feel when you have to do something for a long time?
수험생
I will try to keep calm and patient to handle the problem and the situation I have to face. I will set a long term goal in the plan as well as decompose the target into smaller ones so that I can achieve many smaller goals with every step which is simpler for me to attain.
시험관
Does your job require you to be patient?
수험생
Yes, I think every job requires people to be more patients. In my job, I have to communicate with many other colleagues and some team leaders. In that process, I have to clearly explain my strategies and relevant reasons. So I have to be more patient.
시험관
Are you more patient now than when you were a child?
수험생
I think I am more impatient now. When I was a child, I had more free time to do whatever I want. There was no hurry for me to do something important. I just needed to study seriously and carefully in the school. But now I faced many challenges every day, so I will be impatient at that.
평가
총점
Part 1
Are you a patient person?
점수: 75.0제안: 回答较为直接，但语言表达不够自然，存在语法错误，如“patient to wait”应为“patient when waiting”。建议使用更自然的表达方式，并避免重复。
예시: Yes, I consider myself a patient person. For instance, I don't mind waiting in line at the checkout counter, even if it takes five minutes or longer.
What is it that makes you feel impatient?
점수: 80.0제안: 回答内容较完整，但表达略显笨拙，缺少连贯的连接词。建议使用更自然的句式和连接词，使表达更流畅。
예시: I feel impatient in urgent situations, such as when catching a flight. Since the departure time is fixed, being late can cause people to lose their tickets, which makes them anxious.
How do you feel when you have to do something for a long time?
점수: 85.0제안: 回答内容丰富，但句子结构较复杂，部分表达不够地道。建议简化句子结构，使用更自然的表达，并注意连贯性。
예시: When I have to work on something for a long time, I stay calm and patient. I usually set a long-term goal and break it down into smaller, manageable tasks, which helps me stay motivated and make steady progress.
Does your job require you to be patient?
점수: 78.0제안: 回答基本符合要求，但存在语法错误，如“more patients”应为“more patient”。建议注意语法准确性，并丰富词汇表达。
예시: Yes, my job definitely requires patience. I often communicate with colleagues and team leaders, and I need to explain my strategies clearly, which means I have to be patient throughout the process.
Are you more patient now than when you were a child?
점수: 80.0제안: 回答内容清晰，但部分句子时态和表达不够准确，如“faced”应为“face”。建议注意时态一致性，并使用更自然的表达。
예시: I believe I am less patient now than when I was a child. Back then, I had more free time and no urgent responsibilities. However, facing many daily challenges now makes me feel more impatient.
문법
× I will try to keep calm and patient to handle the problem and the situation I have to face.
✓ I will try to keep calm and patient to handle the problems and the situations I have to face.
这里的“problem”和“situation”指的是多种情况，应该使用复数形式。
× Yes, I think every job requires people to be more patients.
✓ Yes, I think every job requires people to be more patient.
“patient”是形容词，不可数，不能加复数形式“patients”。
× But now I faced many challenges every day, so I will be impatient at that.
✓ But now I face many challenges every day, so I am impatient about that.
“now”表示现在时，应该用一般现在时“face”，而不是过去时“faced”。另外，“impatient at that”应改为“impatient about that”更符合习惯用法。
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