Patience— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 你的回答表达了观点，但语法和表达不够自然，句子结构混乱，且有重复。建议简化句子，使用正确的时态和语法，并避免重复表达。

예시: I'm not a very patient person. For example, when someone does things slowly, I tend to get impatient and ask them to hurry up.

제안: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不清晰。建议使用正确的时态和句子结构，明确表达自己的感受，并避免使用错误的词汇。

예시: I feel impatient when I am speaking but the other person interrupts me and doesn't let me finish my sentence.

제안: 回答中语法错误和表达不清晰，内容不够具体。建议用更准确的词汇描述感受，并提供更具体的例子。

예시: I feel frustrated and bored when I have to do something for a long time, like attending a long lecture that is not interesting and just shows many slides.

제안: 回答内容较好，但语法和表达仍需改进。建议注意时态一致，句子结构清晰，并使用更自然的表达方式。

예시: As a student, I definitely need to be patient. Studying requires concentration to fully understand the material, especially when writing papers.

제안: 回答中时态使用不当，表达不够流畅。建议使用正确的时态，简洁表达观点，并注意词汇的准确性。

예시: I am more patient now than when I was a child because I have more responsibilities at university, such as academic assignments and social activities, so I need to manage my time carefully.

× Honestly I'm not sure if I am a patient person for incidents.

✓ Honestly, I'm not sure if I am a patient person in incidents.

介词使用错误，应该用'in'表示在某种情况下，而不是'for'。

× When I see someone she very slowly do something I just push her and say hurry up and I have no patience to waiting anybody so I'm not sure about this question.

✓ When I see someone doing something very slowly, I just push her and say hurry up, and I have no patience to wait for anybody, so I'm not sure about this question.

动词形式错误，'do'应改为动名词'doing'，'waiting'应改为动词原形'wait'，并且需要介词'for'。

× Well, for example when I speaking to someone but they always stop me and no listen to me to accomplish my own whole sentence, I would feel that she was very impatient.

✓ Well, for example, when I am speaking to someone but they always stop me and do not listen to me to finish my whole sentence, I would feel that she is very impatient.

动词形式错误，'speaking'前缺少助动词'am'，'no listen'应改为'do not listen'，'accomplish'用词不当，改为'finish'更合适。

× For example when you have some lecture that don't have the political meaning and it just a long term speaking and the by the flash PPT it made me feel awful.

✓ For example, when you have some lectures that don't have political meaning and it is just a long speech accompanied by a flash PPT, it makes me feel awful.

介词使用错误，'by the flash PPT'应改为'accompanied by a flash PPT'，'long term speaking'表达不当，改为'long speech'。

× Definitely ask a student. You must have enough patience and the concentration in your study to make sure that you can acquire the knowledge comprehensive.

✓ Definitely, as a student, you must have enough patience and concentration in your study to make sure that you can acquire comprehensive knowledge.

情态动词使用不当，'ask'应为'as'，'the concentration'中冠词多余，'knowledge comprehensive'词序错误，应为'comprehensive knowledge'。

× Especially when you writing the paper, you should concentrate and focus on what you write.

✓ Especially when you are writing the paper, you should concentrate and focus on what you write.

动词形式错误，'writing'前缺少助动词'are'。

× Obviously when I was a child I don't have so much responsibilities, but when I study in university I have so many task, not only the academic assignment but also some society practice, so I have to arrange my schedule with patient.

✓ Obviously, when I was a child, I didn't have so many responsibilities, but when I studied at university, I had so many tasks, not only academic assignments but also some social practices, so I have to arrange my schedule with patience.

名词单复数错误，'responsibilities'复数正确，'task'应为复数'tasks'，'assignment'应为复数'assignments'，'society practice'用词错误，应为'social practices'，'patient'应为名词'patience'。

× Obviously when I was a child I don't have so much responsibilities, but when I study in university I have so many task, not only the academic assignment but also some society practice, so I have to arrange my schedule with patient.

✓ Obviously, when I was a child, I didn't have so many responsibilities, but when I studied at university, I had so many tasks, not only academic assignments but also some social practices, so I had to arrange my schedule with patience.

时态错误，描述过去的事情应使用过去时态，'don't have'改为'didn't have'，'study'改为'studied'，'have'改为'had'。