Patience— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答不够连贯，句子断断续续，缺少完整表达。建议练习连贯表达，避免句子碎片化。

예시: Yes, I consider myself a patient person because my job requires me to interact with many people, and I always try to maintain a calm and understanding attitude towards everyone.

제안: 表达有些重复且不够自然，建议使用更地道的表达方式，并避免重复。

예시: I feel impatient when I have to explain something multiple times because the other person doesn't understand my point.

제안: 语法和表达不够准确，句子结构不完整。建议加强语法练习，使用完整句子表达观点。

예시: I feel quite peaceful and calm when I have to work on something for a long time because I enjoy focusing deeply on tasks.

제안: 句子较长且重复，表达不够简洁。建议使用连接词使句子更流畅，避免重复。

예시: Yes, my job requires patience because I interact with colleagues and clients who have different personalities, so I need to be understanding with all of them.

제안: 表达不完整且语法错误较多，建议练习时态和句子结构，确保表达完整清晰。

예시: Yes, I have become much more patient compared to when I was a child, especially after I graduated and started working.

× Yes, I think I am a patient person because I need. To connect. With so many people from my work and I often maintain a patient attitude to everyone.

✓ Yes, I think I am a patient person because I need to connect with so many people from my work, and I often maintain a patient attitude towards everyone.

原句中“because I need. To connect. With so many people”断句不正确，导致句子结构混乱。应将其合并为完整的句子，且“maintain a patient attitude to everyone”中介词应为“towards”。建议连贯表达，避免断句错误。

× If sometimes some people can't realize what I am seeing and I have to repeat times over times, I will be impatient.

✓ If sometimes some people can't understand what I am saying and I have to repeat many times, I will be impatient.

“repeat times over times”表达不正确，应使用“repeat many times”表示多次重复；“can't realize what I am seeing”语义不清，应为“can't understand what I am saying”。

× I feel quite peaceful and. Quiet because I am a person who like doing long time job.

✓ I feel quite peaceful and quiet because I am a person who likes doing long-time jobs.

“like”应为第三人称单数“likes”，因为主语是“a person”；“long time job”应改为“long-time jobs”表示长期的工作，且“long-time”作为复合形容词需连字符。

× Yes, my job required me to be patient because I have to connect different people such as my colleagues and clients and they are they have different personalities so I need to be patient to all of them.

✓ Yes, my job requires me to be patient because I have to connect with different people such as my colleagues and clients, and they have different personalities, so I need to be patient with all of them.

“required”应为现在时“requires”，因为谈论的是现在的工作；“connect different people”应为“connect with different people”；“patient to all of them”应为“patient with all of them”。

× Yes, I have to say I have changed a lot compared with I was a child after graduated. I become more patient from the.

✓ Yes, I have to say I have changed a lot compared with when I was a child after graduating. I have become more patient since then.

“compared with I was a child”应为“compared with when I was a child”；“after graduated”应为“after graduating”；“I become more patient from the”句子不完整，应改为“I have become more patient since then”。