Patience— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答时应避免语法错误和表达不清，如“fail to young people”应为“face young people”。建议简洁明了地表达观点，并用连接词使句子更流畅。

예시: I am generally not a very patient person, especially at work. However, when I interact with children, I tend to be more patient because I understand their needs better.

제안: 注意主谓一致和单复数形式，如“things is”应为“things are”。回答应更具体，使用连接词如“because”或“and”来连接句子。

예시: I feel impatient mainly because of tight deadlines at work, and also because I have to interact with many people frequently, which can be exhausting.

제안: 回答较完整，但可用更丰富的词汇替换“nervous”，并注意句子结构的多样性。

예시: When I have to work on a task for a long time, I often feel impatient and anxious because I am uncertain about the completion time and worry about wasting time.

제안: 回答中有重复和语法错误，如“my job require”应为“my job requires”。建议简洁表达，避免重复，并使用连接词使句子流畅。

예시: Yes, my job requires me to be patient because I often have to deal with customers, which demands understanding and calmness.

제안: 注意语法时态和表达准确，如“have improved and be more patient”应为“have become more patient”。避免口语填充词，表达更自然。

예시: Yes, I have become more patient now compared to when I was a child, mainly because my work experience has taught me to be more understanding and calm.

× But if I fail to young people, I mean if I face children, I think I can be more patient than usual.

✓ But if I fail with young people, I mean if I face children, I think I can be more patient than usual.

这里的错误是介词使用错误，应该用 'fail with' 而不是 'fail to'。但根据题目要求，只纠正符合语法问题类型的错误，此处不属于列表中的类型，故不做修改。

× The things that make me feel impatient is especially the content of my work because I usually have the tight deadline.

✓ The things that make me feel impatient are especially the content of my work because I usually have tight deadlines.

主语是复数 'things'，谓语动词应使用复数形式 'are'。'the tight deadline' 应改为复数 'tight deadlines'，因为通常有多个截止时间。

× Another things that can make me feel impatient is that I have to face the people.

✓ Another thing that can make me feel impatient is that I have to face people.

'Another' 后应接单数名词 'thing'，而不是复数 'things'。'the people' 改为 'people' 更自然，表示一般人群。

× Yes, I think that my job, my job require me to be patient is because most time of my job is is that I have to face the customers or the people, so I have to be patient to.

✓ Yes, I think that my job requires me to be patient because most of the time I have to face customers or people, so I have to be patient too.

主语 'my job' 是单数，谓语动词应使用第三人称单数形式 'requires'。'most time' 应为 'most of the time'。去掉多余的 'is'。'the customers or the people' 改为 'customers or people' 更自然。'to' 应为 'too'，表示也。

× Yes, I think that I have improved and be more patient now than when than when I was a child because umm, through my work experience it made me try to be a more patient.

✓ Yes, I think that I have improved and become more patient now than when I was a child because, through my work experience, it has made me try to be more patient.

'be' 应改为 'become' 以符合完成时态。'it made me' 应改为现在完成时 'it has made me'，因为影响持续到现在。'a more patient' 中 'a' 不应出现，'patient' 是形容词，不用冠词。