Patience— Part 1 채점 보고서
대화
Part 1
시험관
Are you a patient person?
수험생
Overall, I consider myself a patient person, especially when I am with my child. I barely scold them or punish them whenever they make mistakes. Umm. Instead I would calmly umm just teach them how to do the right thing. In that way umm, I think it would build trust between US and help them learn from their mistakes.
시험관
What is it that makes you feel impatient?
수험생
Mostly at workplace I consider that would always trigger me off. For example, if I am catching a deadline with a project, I'm one of the colleagues is being quite late or not concentrate on enough for this project, I would normally become very impatient.
시험관
How do you feel when you have to do something for a long time?
수험생
I feel quite grateful if I have a long period of time doing just one thing because, uh, I kind of enjoy, uh, immersive environment, spending a long period of time doing just one task who's helped me concentrate better and making significant progress.
시험관
Does your job require you to be patient?
수험생
Yes, my job definitely requires a lot of patience. I have been a recruiter for almost 10 years where I got lots of questions every day from candidate in the market. While I kind of enjoy the whole process as helping them get prepared and work and be more confident in their interview would be.
시험관
Are you more patient now than when you were a child?
수험생
Yes, definitely. Especially when I became the mother, I had to deal with all kinds of problems and dramas and messes every day. It kind of helps me in a way to to produce all the difficult, challenging moments.
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총점
Part 1
Are you a patient person?
점수: 75.0제안: 你的回答表达了耐心的态度，但有些语气词（如“umm”）较多，影响流畅性。建议减少语气词的使用，回答时更自然简洁，同时注意大小写和发音准确。
예시: Yes, I consider myself a patient person, especially with my child. I rarely scold or punish them when they make mistakes. Instead, I calmly teach them the right way, which helps build trust and encourages learning from errors.
What is it that makes you feel impatient?
점수: 70.0제안: 回答中语法和表达有些不准确，建议使用更清晰的句子结构，避免语法错误，并且用连接词使表达更连贯。
예시: I usually feel impatient at work, especially when I have a tight deadline. For example, if a colleague is late or not focused on the project, it makes me quite frustrated.
How do you feel when you have to do something for a long time?
점수: 65.0제안: 回答中有重复和语气词，句子结构不够清晰。建议简化表达，避免重复，使用正确的关系代词和连接词，使句子更流畅。
예시: I feel grateful when I can focus on one task for a long time because I enjoy an immersive environment. This helps me concentrate better and make significant progress.
Does your job require you to be patient?
점수: 68.0제안: 回答中有语法错误和表达不完整，建议使用完整句子，注意主谓一致和时态，表达更准确。
예시: Yes, my job definitely requires a lot of patience. I have been a recruiter for almost 10 years, and I answer many questions from candidates every day. I enjoy helping them prepare and become more confident for their interviews.
Are you more patient now than when you were a child?
점수: 60.0제안: 回答中表达不够清晰，有重复词汇和不准确的用词。建议用更准确的词汇表达经历和感受，避免重复，句子更连贯。
예시: Yes, I am definitely more patient now than when I was a child. Becoming a mother means dealing with many daily challenges, which has helped me develop greater patience.
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