Patience— Part 1 채점 보고서
대화
Part 1
시험관
Are you a patient person?
수험생
To be honest, I think I am not a patient person because I always have so many things to do and I think I have known many time.
시험관
What is it that makes you feel impatient?
수험생
I think when I always have so many things to do and often feel prized for time, this makes me easily frustrated when things don't happen quickly. So umm, I always feel imputation.
시험관
How do you feel when you have to do something for a long time?
수험생
To be honest, in most cases I feel so relaxed and comfortable because I have so many time to do something. But end of the end of time I feel stressed and impatient.
시험관
Does your job require you to be patient?
수험생
The patient is very important in my job because my job have so many project and it's very difficult. It must make people to be patient.
시험관
Are you more patient now than when you were a child?
수험생
Yes, I am more patient now because I have a satisfactory job. This job helps have many complex projects. At the same time it can be quite challenging, so staying calm and patient helps me solve problems more effectively.
평가
총점
Part 1
Are you a patient person?
점수: 50.0제안: 回答不够自然且有语法错误，表达不清晰。建议简洁明了地回答问题，避免重复和语法错误。
예시: To be honest, I am not a very patient person because I usually have many tasks to complete and feel pressed for time.
What is it that makes you feel impatient?
점수: 45.0제안: 回答中有词汇错误（如“prized”应为“pressed”，“imputation”用词不当），表达不清晰。建议使用正确词汇并简洁表达原因。
예시: I feel impatient when I have many tasks and feel pressed for time, so I get frustrated if things don't happen quickly.
How do you feel when you have to do something for a long time?
점수: 55.0제안: 回答中有语法错误和表达不自然，建议使用连贯的句子并正确使用时间表达。
예시: Usually, I feel relaxed when I have plenty of time to do something, but if it takes too long, I start to feel stressed and impatient.
Does your job require you to be patient?
점수: 50.0제안: 回答语法错误较多，表达不流畅。建议使用正确的语法结构，清晰表达工作需要耐心的原因。
예시: Patience is very important in my job because I handle many difficult projects that require careful attention.
Are you more patient now than when you were a child?
점수: 65.0제안: 回答较为完整，但句子结构不够自然，部分表达重复。建议简化句子，使用更自然的表达。
예시: Yes, I am more patient now because my job involves many complex and challenging projects, which require me to stay calm and solve problems effectively.
문법
× I think I have known many time.
✓ I think I have known it many times.
这里的 'many time' 应该用复数形式 'many times'，表示多次。因为 'time' 在表示次数时是可数名词，需用复数形式。
× I think when I always have so many things to do and often feel prized for time, this makes me easily frustrated when things don't happen quickly.
✓ I think when I always have so many things to do and often feel pressed for time, this makes me easily frustrated when things don't happen quickly.
这里 'prized for time' 是错误表达，正确应为 'pressed for time'，表示时间紧迫。
× So umm, I always feel imputation.
✓ So umm, I always feel impatience.
'imputation' 意为归咎，错误使用，应为 'impatience'，表示不耐烦。
× I have so many time to do something.
✓ I have so much time to do something.
'time' 在表示时间量时是不可数名词，应使用 'much' 而非 'many'。
× But end of the end of time I feel stressed and impatient.
✓ But at the end of the time I feel stressed and impatient.
缺少介词 'at'，且 'end of the end of time' 表达重复，应改为 'at the end of the time'。
× The patient is very important in my job because my job have so many project and it's very difficult.
✓ Patience is very important in my job because my job has so many projects and it's very difficult.
'patient' 应为名词 'patience' 表示耐心；'my job have' 主谓不一致，应为 'my job has'；'project' 应为复数 'projects'。
× It must make people to be patient.
✓ It must make people be patient.
动词 'make' 后面直接跟动词原形，不加 'to'。
× This job helps have many complex projects.
✓ This job involves many complex projects.
'helps have' 结构不正确，应改为 'involves' 或 'has'，使句子通顺。
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