Patience— Part 1 채점 보고서
대화
Part 1
시험관
Are you a patient person?
수험생
Well, I'm not very passionate person. For instance sometimes when people they don't finish their work properly and when it will affect me I will feel very angry. But I try to stay calm and find a solution with instead.
시험관
What is it that makes you feel impatient?
수험생
Well, sometimes when I have too many To Do List tests, need to finish and I cannot step by step to complete that, I will feel frustrated. But after all this experience, I find out good management skills cannot just reduce my stress.
시험관
How do you feel when you have to do something for a long time?
수험생
Well, I will feel comfortably because I need to plan the whole strategy to finish the thing. And then second, I will calculate my, uh, my day and then the last prepare my good minor to face the thing I need to finish.
시험관
Does your job require you to be patient?
수험생
Well yes it's required and I have a part time job as assistant and I need to figure out lots of detail information. So this may take a lot of my time and I need to be very careful to focus on every figures. So you still need a passion personality.
시험관
Are you more patient now than when you were a child?
수험생
Well, I would say definitely I'm more passionate compared to maybe 10 years ago because after so many years I've been through lots of teamwork. So let's practice a lot of my personality and I think I become a better person for people.
평가
총점
Part 1
Are you a patient person?
점수: 55.0제안: 回答中存在词汇使用错误（如将'patient'误说成'passionate'），且句子结构不够清晰，表达不够自然。建议加强对关键词汇的准确理解和使用，简化句子结构，避免冗余。
예시: I'm not a very patient person. For example, when others don't complete their work properly and it affects me, I feel quite angry. However, I try to stay calm and find a solution instead.
What is it that makes you feel impatient?
점수: 50.0제안: 回答表达不够连贯，语法和词汇使用有误，且句子过于复杂。建议使用简单明了的句子，合理使用连接词，表达清晰具体。
예시: I feel impatient when I have many tasks to finish and can't complete them step by step. However, I have learned that good management skills can help reduce my stress.
How do you feel when you have to do something for a long time?
점수: 45.0제안: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清的问题，且内容不够具体。建议简化表达，使用正确的语法结构，并具体说明感受和做法。
예시: I feel comfortable when I have to do something for a long time because I can plan my strategy carefully. First, I organize my schedule, and then I prepare myself mentally to complete the task.
Does your job require you to be patient?
점수: 50.0제안: 回答中词汇使用不准确（如'passion'应为'patient'），句子结构混乱。建议注意词汇准确性，简洁表达，避免重复和错误。
예시: Yes, my job requires patience. As a part-time assistant, I need to handle a lot of detailed information carefully, which takes time and focus.
Are you more patient now than when you were a child?
점수: 50.0제안: 回答中词汇错误（'passionate'应为'patient'），表达不够清晰。建议准确使用关键词汇，简洁明了地表达观点。
예시: Yes, I am definitely more patient now than when I was a child. After many years of teamwork, I have developed my personality and become a better person.
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