Patience— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答中语法和表达不够自然，句子结构混乱，建议简化句子并使用更准确的表达。可以直接回答问题，然后用具体例子支持。

예시: I'm not a very patient person. For example, when I do my homework, I prefer to finish it quickly, usually within one or two days, by dividing it into parts and working on it regularly.

제안: 回答内容较为简单，表达有些重复。建议使用连词连接句子，使表达更流畅，同时丰富细节。

예시: I feel impatient when my mom asks me to do chores like laundry or washing dishes. I don't enjoy housework, so I often get frustrated when I have to do it.

제안: 回答较为清晰，但语法错误影响表达。建议注意时态和主谓一致，并使用连接词使句子更连贯。

예시: I feel exhausted when I have to do something for a long time because it takes too long to finish. Also, I usually feel a bit stressed because I want to complete tasks quickly.

제안: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不准确，建议简化句子，注意单复数和冠词的使用，并提高表达的逻辑性。

예시: I don't have a job now, but I think every job requires patience. Nowadays, people can finish their work quickly, so being patient is important when doing any task.

제안: 回答语法错误较多，表达不清晰。建议使用简单句子，注意时态和词形变化，清楚表达观点。

예시: Yes, I am more patient now than when I was a child. When I was young, I used to be very active and playful, but I have become more patient as I have grown older.

× I think it's when my mom telling me to do something that I don't want to, for example the laundry or wash the dishes.

✓ I think it's when my mom tells me to do something that I don't want to, for example the laundry or wash the dishes.

这里主语是第三人称单数（my mom），谓语动词应使用第三人称单数形式，故将telling改为tells。

× I'm not the patient person because every time, well when I'm doing my homework, I always want to make it done like in just two days or one day I I can like separate into parts and do it routinely.

✓ I'm not a patient person because every time, well when I'm doing my homework, I always want to finish it in just one or two days. I can separate it into parts and do it routinely.

这里the patient person中的the不合适，应使用a表示泛指；另外表达更自然的方式是finish it而非make it done。

× I think every jobs needs a sense of patience because in nowadays people can just finish their works in one day, so patient is really important while doing anything.

✓ I think every job needs a sense of patience because nowadays people can just finish their work in one day, so patience is really important while doing anything.

jobs应为单数job，因为every后面用单数；works应为不可数名词work；patient应为名词patience。

× I feel exhausted because it take too long to finish and usually I feel a little bit stressful because I want things done quickly.

✓ I feel exhausted because it takes too long to finish and usually I feel a little bit stressed because I want things done quickly.

主语it是第三人称单数，谓语动词应加s；stressful是形容词，表示使人感到压力，表达感受时应用过去分词stressed。

× Yes, and in my childhood I was a jumping around and just messing around with everyone.

✓ Yes, and in my childhood I was jumping around and just messing around with everyone.

jumping前不应加不定冠词a，因为jumping是动名词短语，不能用冠词修饰。

× So I think I do getting patients when I was when I'm getting older.

✓ So I think I have become more patient as I am getting older.

do getting结构错误，应使用完成时态表达变化；patients应为形容词patient；句子时态混乱，需统一。