Patience— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答不够连贯，语法和词汇使用不准确，表达不自然。建议简洁明了地回答问题，避免重复和语法错误。

예시: No, I am usually not very patient. For example, I find it difficult to listen to long conversations or read lengthy articles because I get bored quickly.

제안: 回答内容模糊且语法错误较多，缺乏具体细节。建议明确表达导致不耐烦的原因，并用具体例子支持。

예시: I feel impatient when I have to focus on something for a long time because it makes me anxious and tired.

제안: 回答较为清晰，但表达不够流畅，存在语法错误。建议使用连贯的句子并丰富细节。

예시: I usually feel anxious when I have to do something for a long time. For example, during my last group discussion, I thought it lasted too long and wasted my time.

제안: 回答不够准确，语法和表达有误。建议直接回答问题并说明原因。

예시: I am currently a student, but I plan to become an accountant in the future, which will require me to be patient.

제안: 表达不清晰，语法错误较多。建议简洁明了地比较现在和过去的耐心程度，并解释原因。

예시: No, I was more patient as a child. Now, because I have more responsibilities and less free time, I feel anxious when things are not efficient.

× I worked, uh, listen a long, uh, conversation and the book to read a very long article because I don't have some patient.

✓ I worked, uh, listened to a long conversation and read a very long article because I don't have much patience.

这里的 'patient' 应该是名词 'patience'，表示耐心；同时 'some patient' 用法错误，应该用不可数名词 'much patience'。另外，'listen' 应该用过去式 'listened'，并且需要加介词 'to'。

× I worked, uh, listen a long, uh, conversation and the book to read a very long article because I don't have some patient.

✓ I worked, uh, listened to a long conversation and read a very long article because I don't have much patience.

动词 'listen' 后面需要加介词 'to'，表示倾听某物。

× I don't have some patient.

✓ I don't have much patience.

'patience' 是不可数名词，不能用 'some'，应使用 'much' 来表示大量的耐心。

× I always feel anxious with.

✓ I always feel anxious.

'anxious' 后面不需要加介词 'with'，直接用形容词即可。

× I have a lot of everyday concentrate for a long time and many experience though.

✓ I have a lot of everyday concentration for a long time and many experiences though.

'concentrate' 应为名词 'concentration'，表示专注；'experience' 复数形式应为 'experiences'。

× I have a lot of everyday concentrate for a long time and many experience though.

✓ I have a lot of everyday concentration for a long time and many experiences though.

'experience' 需要用复数形式 'experiences'，表示多次经历。

× I will feel anxious when I have to do something for a long time. Umm, for example, uh, last group, uh, discussion.

✓ I felt anxious when I had to do something for a long time. Umm, for example, uh, last group, uh, discussion.

描述过去的事件时，动词应使用过去时态。

× I think the time is too long and it waste my time.

✓ I think the time is too long and it wastes my time.

动词 'waste' 应与主语 'it' 保持第三人称单数一致，使用 'wastes'。

× it waste my time.

✓ it wastes my time.

主语是第三人称单数，谓语动词应加 -s。

× I'm a student but the major is a college so in the future maybe I will become a accountant.

✓ I'm a student but my major is in college so in the future maybe I will become an accountant.

'major' 后应加介词 'in' 表示专业；'a accountant' 前应使用 'an' 因为 'accountant' 以元音音素开头。

× maybe I will become a accountant.

✓ maybe I will become an accountant.

以元音音素开头的单词前应使用不定冠词 'an'。

× Oh no, when I was a child I have more patient patience and I think the reason is that I have more things to do and my time is become less and less so I will feel anxious when seeing is ineffective.

✓ Oh no, when I was a child I had more patience and I think the reason is that I have more things to do and my time has become less and less so I feel anxious when seeing is ineffective.

描述过去时应使用过去时 'had'；'patience' 是不可数名词，不用 'more patient patience'。

× when I was a child I have more patient patience

✓ when I was a child I had more patience

描述过去的情况时，动词应使用过去时态 'had'。

× my time is become less and less

✓ my time has become less and less

'become' 作为完成时态应使用现在完成时 'has become'。

× I will feel anxious when seeing is ineffective.

✓ I will feel anxious when I see things as ineffective.

'seeing is ineffective' 结构不完整，缺少主语，需改为 'I see things as ineffective'。