Patience— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 你的回答表达了观点，但语言不够自然，有些句子结构不完整，且表达重复。建议简化句子结构，避免重复，并使用更自然的表达方式。

예시: I'm not very patient because I get frustrated when people work inefficiently. However, I try to help them improve by giving guidance.

제안: 回答不连贯，表达不清晰，缺乏具体细节。建议练习组织语言，使用连贯的句子，并具体说明原因。

예시: I feel impatient when people use the wrong methods because it leads to poor results and wastes time.

제안: 回答中有语法错误和表达不清，内容不够具体。建议使用正确的语法，明确表达观点，并提供具体理由。

예시: I feel tired when I have to do something for a long time because I prefer working quickly. However, I understand that some tasks require patience and can be beneficial.

제안: 回答中有语法和表达错误，句子结构混乱。建议简化句子，使用正确的语法，并具体说明工作中如何表现耐心。

예시: Yes, my job requires a lot of patience because I deal with many clients who often have urgent questions, so I need to remain calm and helpful.

제안: 回答不完整且表达混乱，缺乏连贯性和具体细节。建议练习完整表达观点，使用连贯句子，并具体说明原因。

예시: I am less patient now than when I was a child because my busy work makes me stressed and anxious, so I often want quick results.

× When some people do something not very efficiently, I will be a little bit angry and stressful.

✓ When some people do something not very efficiently, I will be a little bit angry and stressed.

这里“stressful”是形容词，意思是“令人紧张的”，而句子中应表达“我感到有压力”，应使用过去分词“stressed”作为形容词，表示“感到压力的”。

× Wrong Ways and Means some bad results or or bad efficiency in resolving this question.

✓ Wrong ways and means cause some bad results or bad efficiency in resolving this question.

“Ways and Means”是复数形式，谓语动词应使用复数形式“cause”而非省略。原句缺少谓语动词，导致语法错误。

× Wrong Ways and Means some bad results or or bad efficiency in resolving this question.

✓ Wrong ways and means cause some bad results or bad efficiency in resolving this question.

原句缺少谓语动词，导致句子结构不完整。需要添加谓语动词“cause”使句子完整。

× I like to do something with some very fast speed and with a high efficiency.

✓ I like to do something at a very fast speed and with high efficiency.

“with some very fast speed”搭配不当，正确表达应为“at a very fast speed”；“with a high efficiency”中“efficiency”通常不加冠词。

× Sometimes my clients are very stressful and busy to ask me some questions some so I need to treat them up with more patient.

✓ Sometimes my clients are very stressed and busy asking me some questions, so I need to treat them with more patience.

“stressful”应改为“stressed”表示感到压力；“busy to ask”应改为“busy asking”；“treat them up”错误，正确为“treat them”；“more patient”应为“more patience”，因为“patient”是形容词，“patience”是名词。

× Actually, I'm not more patient than the one I was a child because nowadays I was very.

✓ Actually, I'm not more patient than I was as a child because nowadays I am very busy.

“the one I was a child”表达不正确，应直接用“I was as a child”；“nowadays I was very”时态错误，应为“nowadays I am very”。

× Nowadays I was very. I'm very busy with my work into the quality of my work make me become more stressful and anxious.

✓ Nowadays I am very busy with my work, and the quality of my work makes me more stressed and anxious.

“nowadays”表示现在时，不能用过去时“was”；“make”应与主语“quality”保持单数一致，改为“makes”；“stressful”应改为“stressed”表示感到压力。

× I am always eager to know the results of.

✓ I am always eager to know the results.

句子末尾“of”多余，导致句子结构不完整，应删除。