Patience— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答中存在语法错误，如“need patient”应为“need patience”，且部分表达不够自然。建议注意词汇的正确使用，避免重复表达“patience”。

예시: Yes, I consider myself a patient person because I stay calm in stressful situations and often help my friends with their problems. For example, I enjoy gardening and fishing, both of which require a lot of patience.

제안: 回答中存在语法错误，如“can makes”应为“can make”，且表达略显重复。建议使用更丰富的词汇和连接词，使表达更流畅自然。

예시: Traffic jams often make me feel impatient because they are very common in my city. Moreover, they cause me to be late for school, which increases my stress levels.

제안: 回答中时态使用不当，“worried”应为“worry”。建议注意时态一致性，并尝试使用更多连接词丰富内容。

예시: I usually feel quite anxious when I have to work on something for a long time because I worry that I might not finish it on time.

제안: 回答中存在语法错误，如“study require”应为“studies require”，且表达不够自然。建议使用更准确的词汇和句式，避免重复。

예시: Yes, my studies definitely require patience. For instance, my teacher expects me to concentrate during class and complete my homework on time, which helps me develop patience.

제안: 回答中存在词汇错误，“importance of patient”应为“importance of patience”，且时态使用不当。建议注意词汇准确性和时态一致性。

예시: Yes, I am definitely more patient now than when I was a child. Over the years, my life experiences have taught me the importance of patience, especially when dealing with difficult situations or people.

× They all need patient.

✓ They all need patience.

这里需要名词patience（耐心），而不是形容词patient。'Need'后面应接名词，表示需要某种品质。

× I think traffic jams can makes me feel impatient.

✓ I think traffic jams can make me feel impatient.

情态动词can后面动词用原形，不能加s。这里makes应改为make。

× Traffic jams also make me late from school and let me feel really stressful.

✓ Traffic jams also make me late for school and make me feel really stressed.

短语是be late for sth.，不能用late from。'Let me feel really stressful'应改为'make me feel really stressed'，因为stressful是形容词，表示使人感到压力大，stressed表示感到压力。

× I usually feel quite anxious when I have to do something for a long time because I worried that I might not be able to finish it on time.

✓ I usually feel quite anxious when I have to do something for a long time because I worry that I might not be able to finish it on time.

句子主句是现在时，原因状语从句也应使用一般现在时，worry是现在时，worrie是过去式，不符合语境。

× Yes, of course my study require me to be patient.

✓ Yes, of course my study requires me to be patient.

study是单数，谓语动词require应加s，变为requires，保持主谓一致。

× My teacher asked me to focus on in her class and finish my homework on time.

✓ My teacher asked me to focus in her class and finish my homework on time.

动词focus后面接介词in表示专注于某处，不能同时用focus on in。

× So I think I'm patient on my study.

✓ So I think I'm patient in my study.

形容词patient后面通常接介词in，表示在某方面有耐心，不能用on。

× Over the years, my life experience had told me the importance of patient, especially when dealing with difficult situations or people.

✓ Over the years, my life experience has told me the importance of patience, especially when dealing with difficult situations or people.

现在完成时has told更符合“多年来”的语境。'patient'应改为名词patience。