Patience— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答时应更自然简洁，避免重复表达“person who is patient”，并且可以直接给出观点后用具体例子支持。

예시: No, I'm not very patient because I dislike activities like shopping that require waiting for a long time.

제안: 回答较好，但可以使用更多连接词使句子更流畅，同时丰富细节。

예시: I feel impatient when I have to queue for a long time because it wastes my time, especially if I'm in a hurry to get somewhere.

제안: 回答不够连贯，开头“Time”无意义，应直接表达感受，并注意语法和句子结构。

예시: I usually feel anxious when I have to work on something for a long time, especially if there is a deadline. It makes me stressed and unsure about how to manage my time.

제안: 回答可以更自然，避免口语化的“Yeah, of course”，并且用更准确的词汇描述工作内容。

예시: Yes, my job involves scientific research where I need to collect data carefully, so being patient is essential to avoid errors.

제안: 回答中语法错误较多，且表达不够清晰，应注意时态和句子结构。

예시: No, I don't think I'm more patient now. When I was a child, I could concentrate on activities like playing with Lego for a long time.

× I really hate queuing up for a long time because I think it is a waste of time, especially when I'm in a rush.

✓ I really hate queuing for a long time because I think it is a waste of time, especially when I'm in a rush.

动词短语中“queue up”中的“up”是多余的，英语中“queue”本身就表示排队，后面加“up”不符合习惯用法，应去掉“up”。

× Time. I always get sense of anxiety when have to do something for a long time.

✓ I always get a sense of anxiety when I have to do something for a long time.

句子缺少主语“I”和冠词“a”，导致结构不完整。应补充完整主语和冠词，使句子通顺。

× Every time when I face this kind of situation I don't know what to do and how to do, especially when there is a deadline.

✓ Every time I face this kind of situation, I don't know what to do and how to do it, especially when there is a deadline.

“Every time when”重复，应该简化为“Every time”。“how to do”后缺少宾语“it”，需要补充。

× Yeah, of course, I engage in a science subject which needs me to collect data, so I have to be patient to prevent some mistakes.

✓ Yeah, of course, I engage in a science subject which requires me to collect data, so I have to be patient to avoid some mistakes.

“engage in a science subject”表达不准确，通常说“study a subject”或“work in a field”。“needs me to collect”不自然，改为“requires me to collect”。“prevent mistakes”用法不当，应该用“avoid mistakes”。

× I think I was more patient when I was a child than now because when I was a kid I can focus on something for a really long time, especially when I was playing the toys like logo.

✓ I think I was more patient when I was a child than now because when I was a kid I could focus on something for a really long time, especially when I was playing with toys like Lego.

“can”时态不对，应改为过去时“could”。“the toys”中的定冠词不必要，应去掉。“logo”应为“Lego”，且前面应加介词“with”。