Patience— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答时语法和表达不够准确，且有重复和停顿。建议简洁明了地表达观点，避免语法错误和多余词汇。

예시: Yes, I consider myself a patient person because I enjoy doing detailed and delicate crafts that require careful attention.

제안: 回答内容较为混乱，句子结构不清晰。建议使用连贯的句子，明确表达原因，并使用连接词使表达更流畅。

예시: I feel impatient when I have to repeat instructions multiple times, especially if the person doesn't understand despite my explanations.

제안: 表达有些不自然，语法错误较多。建议使用更自然的表达方式，并注意时态和语法的正确性。

예시: When I have to work on something for a long time, I find it challenging, so I create a schedule to ensure I complete the task before the deadline.

제안: 回答中有较多语法和表达错误，句子不连贯。建议简化句子结构，清晰表达观点，并避免重复。

예시: Yes, as an English translation student, I need to be patient because translating sentences often requires looking up words in the dictionary many times.

제안: 表达不够流畅，语法错误较多。建议使用正确的时态和句型，表达更自然。

예시: Yes, I am more patient now than when I was a child because I have learned that waiting can lead to better opportunities.

× I think I'm a patient person because I like to some very tiny and uh, uh, dedicate craft.

✓ I think I'm a patient person because I like to do some very tiny and dedicated crafts.

这里缺少动词“do”，且“craft”应为复数形式“crafts”，因为表示多种手工艺品。

× And the people who you talk to him how to do it, but he doesn't know how to do and you teach him and he can't understand your words.

✓ And the people who you talk to about how to do it, but he doesn't know how to do it, and you teach him and he can't understand your words.

“talk to him how to do it”表达不正确，应为“talk to about how to do it”，且缺少“it”使句子完整。

× That made me impatient.

✓ That makes me impatient.

前文描述的是一般情况，时态应为一般现在时，且“made”应改为“makes”。

× I may think it will be a tough task and I need to make the long term schedule to make sure I well don't delay the task until the deadline.

✓ I may think it will be a tough task and I need to make a long-term schedule to make sure I don't delay the task until the deadline.

“the long term schedule”应为不定冠词“a long-term schedule”，且“well”多余，应删除。

× I'm a student majoring in UH English translation and the you need to be patient to translating the sentence uh and you made checked one word in the dictionary.

✓ I'm a student majoring in UH English translation and you need to be patient when translating sentences, and you may check one word in the dictionary.

“patient to translating”应改为“patient when translating”，且“made checked”不正确，应为“may check”。

× It's a must cost many times.

✓ It must cost a lot of time.

“must cost many times”表达不自然，应改为“must cost a lot of time”，表示花费很多时间。

× So it need patience. It need your patience.

✓ So it needs patience. It needs your patience.

主语“it”是第三人称单数，谓语动词应加-s，变为“needs”。

× Yes, of course when I was a child I don't, I didn't like waiting and I can't wait more, one more second.

✓ Yes, of course when I was a child I didn't like waiting and I couldn't wait even one more second.

描述过去的习惯应使用过去时，“don't”应为“didn't”，“can't”应为“couldn't”，且“more, one more second”表达不清，应改为“even one more second”。

× But now I understand that waiting is for a another better opportunities.

✓ But now I understand that waiting is for another better opportunity.

“a another”重复冠词，应去掉“a”，且“opportunities”应为单数“opportunity”，与“another”搭配。

× So I'm be patient.

✓ So I'm patient.

“I'm be”结构错误，应直接用“I'm patient”。