Machine— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is somewhat repetitive and lacks clarity. Try to make your response more concise and avoid redundancy by clearly stating the benefits of the computer. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

예시: My favourite machine at home is the computer because it helps me learn new information and supports my studies by providing access to a wide range of resources.

제안: Your answer is too general and lacks specific reasons or examples. Instead of just stating that many people don't have these machines, explain why you think they are not important or useful, and consider using linking words to improve coherence.

예시: I think washing and sweeping machines are not very important because many people manage household chores manually, which can be more cost-effective and environmentally friendly.

제안: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to express your experience more clearly and use correct tense and sentence structure. Also, avoid vague phrases and provide specific details.

예시: Yes, I always read the instructions before using machines because five years ago I damaged a device by not following the guidelines properly.

제안: Your answer has some grammar mistakes and unclear phrases. Try to use correct grammar and be more specific about the risks. Use linking words to connect your ideas logically.

예시: Yes, I believe reading instructions is important because misuse of devices can cause accidents, such as fires, so following guidelines helps ensure safety.

× My favorite device in my home is computer because it allows me to know many things and also it helps me when I'm studying because I find a lot of things that I don't when I study something.

✓ My favorite device in my home is the computer because it allows me to know many things and also it helps me when I'm studying because I find a lot of things that I don't when I study something.

The word 'computer' is a singular countable noun and requires the definite article 'the' when referring to a specific item known to both speaker and listener. Omitting 'the' before 'computer' is incorrect in this context.

× My favorite device in my home is computer because it allows me to know many things and also it helps me when I'm studying because I find a lot of things that I don't when I study something.

✓ My favorite device in my home is the computer because it allows me to know many things and also it helps me when I'm studying because I find a lot of things that I don't find when I study something.

The phrase 'I find a lot of things that I don't' is incomplete and unclear. Adding the verb 'find' after 'I don't' completes the comparison and clarifies the meaning.

× I believe washing machines and sweeping machines are not so important because in fact many people don't have such machines, which means they are not necessary or very useful.

✓ I believe washing machines and sweeping machines are not so important because, in fact, many people don't have such machines, which means they are not necessary or very useful.

The sentence is mostly correct, but adding commas around 'in fact' improves clarity. No singular/plural error here, but punctuation helps meaning.

× Yes, I always read the instructions before using some machines because without reading them I have a experience that I made five year because of the misuse of the machine.

✓ Yes, I always read the instructions before using some machines because without reading them I had an experience five years ago because of the misuse of the machine.

The phrase 'I have a experience that I made five year' is incorrect. 'Experience' is an uncountable noun here and requires 'an' before it. Also, 'made five year' should be 'had an experience five years ago' to correctly express past time and quantity.

× Yes, I always read the instructions before using some machines because without reading them I have a experience that I made five year because of the misuse of the machine.

✓ Yes, I always read the instructions before using some machines because without reading them I had an experience five years ago because of the misuse of the machine.

The event happened in the past, so the past tense 'had' is required instead of 'have'. Also, 'five year' should be plural 'five years' to match the quantity.

× Yes, I think it is important to read instruction before using it because many people close fire due to the misuse of the devices.

✓ Yes, I think it is important to read instructions before using it because many people cause fires due to the misuse of the devices.

'Instruction' should be plural 'instructions' when referring to general guidelines. Also, 'close fire' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'cause fires' to express that people start fires accidentally.