Machine— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答中存在语法错误，如“air condition”应为“air conditioner”，且句子结构不够自然。建议注意单复数和冠词的使用，避免语法错误，同时可以丰富细节，使表达更流畅。

예시: My favourite machine at home is the air conditioner because summers in Shenzhen are extremely hot and humid. It makes the environment much more comfortable and helps me relax after a long day.

제안: 回答中有语法和表达不清的问题，如“The Dirty clothes certainly”不自然，句子不完整。建议使用更准确的词汇和完整句子，避免语法错误，并且逻辑更连贯。

예시: Yes, I definitely think washing machines and sweeping machines are important. For example, washing machines help us clean dirty clothes easily, and sweeping machines make cleaning the floor faster, especially when we are busy.

제안: 回答中“instruction”应为复数“instructions”，“diverse”用词不当，应为“device”。建议注意词汇准确性和语法，同时可以增加连接词使表达更连贯。

예시: Yes, I always read the instructions before using a machine because I am not good at operating new devices. For example, I carefully follow the guidelines to avoid making mistakes or damaging the machine.

제안: 回答中存在拼写错误，如“rake”应为“read”，“diversity”用词错误，应为“device”。句子结构不够自然，建议注意拼写和词汇准确性，使用连接词使表达更流畅。

예시: Yes, I think it is very important to read the instructions carefully. By following the steps one by one, we can use the new device efficiently. This also helps avoid mistakes and makes the operation easier.

× the air condition is my top choice because the Shenzhen in summer are extremely hot and humid.

✓ the air conditioner is my top choice because Shenzhen in summer is extremely hot and humid.

这里“air condition”应为“air conditioner”，表示空调设备，且“Shenzhen”作为地名不需要冠词“the”，且主语“Shenzhen”是单数，谓语动词应使用单数形式“is”。

× Air condition can makes the environment much more comfortable.

✓ Air conditioner can make the environment much more comfortable.

动词“make”在第三人称单数时不加“s”，且“Air condition”应为“Air conditioner”。

× washing machines can help us clean The Dirty clothes certainly without much effort

✓ washing machines can help us clean the dirty clothes certainly without much effort

“The Dirty clothes”中的“Dirty”不应大写，且“the”应小写。

× sweeping machines can help us clean the room and after we have a busy.

✓ sweeping machines can help us clean the room after we have been busy.

原句结构不完整，“after we have a busy”不通顺，应改为“after we have been busy”表示“我们忙碌之后”。

× I always read the instruction before using a machine

✓ I always read the instructions before using a machine

“instruction”应为复数形式“instructions”，表示说明书的内容。

× I am not good at operating a new diverse.

✓ I am not good at operating a new device.

“diverse”是形容词，错误使用，应为名词“device”，表示设备。

× I usually carefully follow the guidelines to use a new machine to avoid making mistakes or damage it.

✓ I usually carefully follow the guidelines to use a new machine to avoid making mistakes or damaging it.

“damage”作为动词时应使用动名词形式“damaging”与“making”保持一致。

× I think it is very important to rake the instructions carefully.

✓ I think it is very important to read the instructions carefully.

“rake”是错误单词，应为“read”，表示“阅读”。

× By following the step one by one, we can ensure that we use the new diversity and efficiently.

✓ By following the steps one by one, we can ensure that we use the new device efficiently.

“step”应为复数“steps”，且“diversity”错误，应为“device”，表示设备。

× This also helps to avoid mistake and make the operation easier.

✓ This also helps to avoid mistakes and make the operation easier.

“mistake”应为复数“mistakes”，表示避免错误的复数形式。