Machine— Part 1 채점 보고서
대화
Part 1
시험관
What is your favourite machine in your home?
수험생
My favorite machine must be my computer. I use my computer a lot, like everyday morning I will use my computer to check the mail I received and at the noon I will use my computer to watch a video with.
시험관
Do you think washing machines and sweeping machines are important?
수험생
Yes, Bose machine is important in daily life. We need these two machines to maintain our living quality and this machine can also help you to save your time.
시험관
Do you read the instructions before using a machine?
수험생
I have never read the instructions before using a machine 'cause I believe I can do it by myself and I don't want to rely on instruction. Well, I believe I can do it by myself and I don't need help.
시험관
Do you think it is important to read the instructions?
수험생
I do think it is important to read the instruction because reading the instruction can help you to figure things out and when you finding some error you can use instructions to find the answer and how to use the machine.
평가
총점
Part 1
What is your favourite machine in your home?
점수: 65.0제안: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，且句子较长且重复。建议简化句子结构，避免重复，并使用更自然的表达方式。
예시: My favourite machine at home is my computer. I use it every morning to check my emails and in the afternoon to watch videos.
Do you think washing machines and sweeping machines are important?
점수: 55.0제안: 回答中出现了不明确的词汇（如“Bose machine”），且表达不够具体。建议明确指代，丰富细节，并使用连接词使表达更连贯。
예시: Yes, washing machines and vacuum cleaners are very important in daily life because they help us keep our homes clean and save a lot of time.
Do you read the instructions before using a machine?
점수: 60.0제안: 回答重复且缺乏细节，表达不够自然。建议避免重复，增加原因说明，并使用连接词。
예시: I usually don't read the instructions before using a machine because I like to figure things out on my own, which makes me feel more confident.
Do you think it is important to read the instructions?
점수: 70.0제안: 回答表达较为清晰，但存在语法错误和重复。建议简化句子结构，使用连接词使表达更流畅。
예시: Yes, I think reading instructions is important because it helps you understand how to use the machine properly and solve any problems that may occur.
문법
× Yes, Bose machine is important in daily life.
✓ Yes, both machines are important in daily life.
这里的意思是指两台机器，应该用复数形式machines，而不是单数machine。Bose可能是误写，应为both，表示两者都重要。
× We need these two machines to maintain our living quality and this machine can also help you to save your time.
✓ We need these two machines to maintain our living quality and these machines can also help you to save your time.
前面提到的是两台机器，后面指代时也应使用复数形式these machines，而不是单数this machine。
× like everyday morning I will use my computer to check the mail I received and at the noon I will use my computer to watch a video with.
✓ Like every morning, I use my computer to check the mail I received, and at noon, I use my computer to watch a video.
“everyday morning”应为“every morning”；“at the noon”应为“at noon”；“watch a video with”结构不完整，应去掉“with”。此外，句子中不需要使用将来时“will”，因为描述的是习惯动作。
× when you finding some error you can use instructions to find the answer and how to use the machine.
✓ When you find some errors, you can use the instructions to find the answer and learn how to use the machine.
“when you finding”应改为“when you find”，因为此处需要动词原形；“some error”应为复数“some errors”；“use instructions”前应加定冠词“the instructions”；“and how to use the machine”结构不完整，需补充动词“learn”。
× I do think it is important to read the instruction because reading the instruction can help you to figure things out
✓ I do think it is important to read the instructions because reading the instructions can help you to figure things out
“instruction”在此处应使用复数形式“instructions”，表示说明书的内容。
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