Machine— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答が不自然で文法的な誤りが多く、意味が伝わりにくいです。より明確で自然な英語表現を使い、理由を具体的に述べる練習をしましょう。

예시: My favourite machine at home is my phone because it helps me stay connected and access information easily.

제안: 文法の誤りと不自然な表現があり、内容が曖昧です。理由を明確にし、具体的な効果を説明する練習をしましょう。

예시: Yes, I think washing machines and vacuum cleaners are important because they save time and make household chores easier.

제안: 回答が意味不明で文法的にも誤りが多いです。質問に直接答え、理由を簡潔に述べる練習をしましょう。

예시: No, I usually don't read the instructions because the machines are easy to use.

제안: 回答が非常に不明瞭で、質問に答えていません。質問の意図を理解し、簡潔で明確な答えを練習しましょう。

예시: I think reading instructions is important to use machines safely and correctly.

× My favorite machine is my phone because it useful for me.

✓ My favorite machine is my phone because it is useful for me.

The sentence is missing the verb 'is' before the adjective 'useful'. In English, when describing something with an adjective, a linking verb such as 'is' is required to connect the subject and the adjective. Without 'is', the sentence is grammatically incorrect.

× So we can know. That many things.

✓ So we can know many things.

The original sentence is fragmented and incorrectly split into two parts. Combining them into one sentence improves clarity and grammatical correctness. The phrase 'So we can know many things.' is a complete sentence expressing the intended meaning.

× If we use it, we can first finish boring do.

✓ If we use them, we can finish boring tasks quickly.

The pronoun 'it' is incorrect because it refers to multiple machines (washing machines and sweeping machines), so 'them' should be used. Also, 'boring do' is not a correct phrase; it should be 'boring tasks' or 'boring chores'. The word 'first' is misplaced and unnecessary here, so it is removed for clarity.

× No, I didn't read the interaction before using a machine because it is easy for me to use machine.

✓ No, I didn't read the instructions before using a machine because it is easy for me to use the machine.

The word 'interaction' is incorrect; the correct word is 'instructions'. Also, 'machine' needs the definite article 'the' because it refers to a specific machine being used. The sentence correctly uses past tense 'didn't read' for the action before using the machine.

× Massey is useful, so we cannot we.

✓ Machines are useful, so we can use them.

The original sentence contains unclear and incorrect words: 'Massey' seems to be a misspelling of 'machines', and 'so we cannot we' is grammatically incorrect and unclear. The corrected sentence uses the plural noun 'machines' and the correct pronouns 'we' and 'them' to express the intended meaning clearly.

× I don't think it is important to lead the interactions because.

✓ I don't think it is important to read the instructions because.

The word 'lead' is incorrect in this context; the correct verb is 'read'. Also, 'interactions' is incorrect; the correct noun is 'instructions'. The sentence is incomplete and needs to be finished properly to convey the meaning.

× Massey is. Not interactions can useful.

✓ Machines are not always useful without instructions.

The original sentence is fragmented and contains incorrect words: 'Massey' should be 'machines', and 'Not interactions can useful' is grammatically incorrect. The corrected sentence provides a clear and grammatically correct statement related to the context.