Machine— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Try to use correct vocabulary and avoid confusion between similar sounding words like 'medicine' and 'machine'. Also, keep your answer clear and concise, directly addressing the question with relevant details. Use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

예시: My favourite machine at home is the automatic washing machine. It helps me clean clothes quickly, especially those worn for just a day and slightly sweaty. This machine makes my daily chores much easier and saves me a lot of time.

제안: Focus on clarity and coherence by structuring your answer with clear sentences and appropriate linking words. Avoid unclear phrases and ensure your vocabulary fits the context. Try to explain why these machines are important with specific reasons.

예시: Yes, I believe washing and sweeping machines are very important. Since we wear clothes daily, washing them by hand can be tiring and time-consuming. Moreover, sweeping machines help keep the house clean and tidy, which is essential for good health. Therefore, these machines greatly assist us in managing daily chores efficiently.

제안: Make sure to use the correct terms, such as 'machines' instead of 'medicines'. Also, try to complete your sentences fully and use linking words to explain why reading instructions is important.

예시: Yes, I always read the instructions provided with machines. It is important because the manuals help us understand how to use the machine properly and maintain its functionality for a longer time.

제안: Avoid repeating words and ensure correct vocabulary, such as 'machine' instead of 'message'. Use linking words to explain consequences clearly and keep your answer concise and logical.

예시: Yes, reading instructions is definitely important. If we don't follow them, we might use the machine incorrectly, which can damage it or reduce its efficiency over time.

× Their favorite medicine in my house is the washing machine automated one.

✓ My favorite machine in my house is the automated washing machine.

The pronoun 'Their' is incorrectly used instead of 'My' to refer to the student's own favorite machine. Also, 'medicine' is incorrect here; it should be 'machine'. The sentence should clearly state the student's own favorite machine.

× It makes it easy for me to perform my daily chores on a daily basis.

✓ It makes it easy for me to perform my daily chores.

The phrase 'on a daily basis' is redundant when 'daily' is already used. Removing redundancy improves clarity and conciseness.

× I use it specifically for the clutter being worn only for a day and just remove the sweat.

✓ I use it specifically for clothes worn only for a day to remove sweat.

The word 'clutter' is incorrect; it should be 'clothes'. Also, the phrase 'being worn only for a day' is awkward; rephrasing improves clarity. 'Just remove the sweat' is incomplete; it should be connected properly to the sentence.

× The worst thing is in four ones we wear clothes on a daily basis and it becomes a tedious work when we have to watch it repeatedly and the automatic the Washington specialist of great health and if it comes to the sweeping, it's important to keep the house clean and tidy and they come as a big health to help you in your daily chores so the.

✓ The worst thing is that we wear clothes daily, and it becomes tedious to wash them repeatedly. The automatic washing machine is very helpful for health. As for sweeping, it's important to keep the house clean and tidy, and these machines greatly help with daily chores.

The original sentence is confusing and contains many errors including incorrect pronouns, wrong words ('Washington' instead of 'washing'), and sentence structure issues. Correcting pronouns and restructuring the sentence improves clarity and meaning.

× Yes, I do read the instructions from the manuals that is being provided along with the medicines.

✓ Yes, I do read the instructions from the manuals that are provided along with the machines.

'Manuals' is plural, so the verb should be 'are' instead of 'is'. Also, 'medicines' is incorrect; it should be 'machines'.

× It is very important to read the manuals as it keeps helps us in using the medicine to its maximum and it's functioning and keeps their.

✓ It is very important to read the manuals as they help us use the machine to its maximum capacity and ensure proper functioning.

The sentence has incorrect pronouns ('it' instead of 'they'), wrong word choice ('medicine' instead of 'machine'), and incomplete phrases ('keeps their'). Correcting pronouns and word choice clarifies the meaning.

× Yes, it is definitely important to read the instructions because not reading the instructions would lead into using the message in the wrong way, which will spoils the message earlier or it will reduce the efficiency to a certain level if it's if it is not used correctly.

✓ Yes, it is definitely important to read the instructions because not reading them would lead to using the machine incorrectly, which will spoil the machine earlier or reduce its efficiency if it is not used properly.

The sentence contains incorrect pronouns ('message' instead of 'machine'), verb form errors ('spoils' should be 'spoil'), and awkward phrasing. Correcting these improves clarity and grammatical accuracy.