Machine— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is relevant but needs improvement in grammar and sentence structure. Try to use correct verb forms and articles, and avoid redundancy. Also, add linking words to make your answer more coherent.

예시: My favourite machine at home is the coffee maker, which is an essential part of my kitchen. I love starting my day with a fresh cup of coffee because it makes my morning very special. Moreover, I enjoy experimenting with different coffee flavours to keep things interesting.

제안: Focus on correct grammar and sentence clarity. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly. Also, be more specific about how these machines help in daily life.

예시: Yes, washing machines and sweeping machines play an important role in our lives because they save a lot of time and effort. Consequently, people can multitask and spend more quality time with their families.

제안: Improve grammar by using plural forms and correct verb tenses. Also, explain why reading instructions is helpful to make your answer more complete.

예시: Yes, of course, I usually read the instructions before using a machine because it helps me to operate it properly and avoid any mistakes.

제안: Your answer needs better grammar and clearer expression. Use linking words and correct sentence structure to explain why reading instructions is important.

예시: Yes, it is important to read the instructions before operating any machine because it helps to use the machine correctly and avoid mistakes or accidents.

× In my home, my favorite machine is a coffee maker which is essential part of my kitchen.

✓ In my home, my favorite machine is a coffee maker which is an essential part of my kitchen.

The sentence is missing the indefinite article 'an' before 'essential part'. In English, singular countable nouns usually require an article. Here, 'essential part' is singular and countable, so 'an' is needed before it.

× I love starting my day with a fresh cup of coffee which makes my morning a very special.

✓ I love starting my day with a fresh cup of coffee which makes my morning very special.

The adjective 'special' does not need the article 'a' before it when used with 'very'. The phrase 'a very special' is incomplete without a noun following 'special'. Here, 'morning' is the noun, so 'very special' should be used without 'a'.

× I also enjoy experiment with different coffee.

✓ I also enjoy experimenting with different coffee.

After the verb 'enjoy', the gerund form (verb + -ing) should be used. Therefore, 'experiment' should be changed to 'experimenting'.

× Washing machines and sweeping machines are play important role in our life.

✓ Washing machines and sweeping machines play an important role in our life.

The phrase 'are play' is incorrect. The verb 'play' should be used directly with the plural subject without 'are'. Also, 'important role' is a singular countable noun phrase and requires the article 'an' before it.

× In that time people use multitask and spend their time with families.

✓ At that time, people multitask and spend their time with their families.

The preposition 'In' should be 'At' when referring to a specific time. 'Multitask' is a verb and does not need 'use' before it. Also, 'families' should be preceded by 'their' to specify whose families are meant.

× Yes, of course I usually read the instruction before using the machine.

✓ Yes, of course I usually read the instructions before using the machine.

'Instruction' is a countable noun in plural form when referring to multiple guidelines, so it should be 'instructions'.

× It give me help to use a proper machine.

✓ It gives me help to use the machine properly.

The verb 'give' should be in third person singular form 'gives' to agree with the singular subject 'It'. Also, 'a proper machine' is vague; 'the machine' is better here. 'Properly' is the correct adverb form to describe the verb 'use'.

× Yes, it is important to read the instructions of any operator to using before it help to operating the machine and avoid the mistake or accident.

✓ Yes, it is important to read the instructions before using any machine as it helps to operate the machine correctly and avoid mistakes or accidents.

The original sentence has incorrect prepositions and word forms. 'Instructions of any operator to using before' is incorrect; it should be 'instructions before using any machine'. 'Help to operating' should be 'helps to operate'. Also, 'the mistake or accident' should be plural 'mistakes or accidents' to generalize.