Machine— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答中表达较为简单，句子结构重复，缺少连贯的连接词，且细节不够具体。建议使用更多连接词使表达更流畅，并丰富细节描述。

예시: My favorite machine at home is the washing machine because it saves me a lot of time by cleaning all my dirty clothes efficiently. Moreover, it has various settings that help me take care of different fabrics, which makes laundry much easier.

제안: 回答内容重复且表达不够简洁，句子较长且缺少适当的连接词。建议简化句子结构，使用连接词提升逻辑性，并提供更具体的例子。

예시: Yes, I believe both washing machines and sweeping machines are essential because they help reduce the amount of housework we need to do. For example, without these machines, cleaning clothes and floors would take much more time and effort.

제안: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，且缺少连贯性。建议使用正式表达，注意语法，并补充具体原因。

예시: No, I usually don't read the instructions before using a machine because I studied engineering at university and feel confident in handling most machines based on my knowledge.

제안: 回答中存在重复和语法错误，表达不够简洁。建议使用更准确的表达方式，避免重复，并用连接词使句子更流畅。

예시: It depends. For people who are unfamiliar with a machine, reading the instructions is important to use it safely and effectively. However, experienced users might find the instructions unnecessary.

× My favorite machine is washing machine because washing machine could wash all my dirty clothes and I don't wash the clothes by myself.

✓ My favorite machine is the washing machine because the washing machine can wash all my dirty clothes and I don't wash the clothes by myself.

这里缺少冠词“the”，因为“washing machine”是特指家里的洗衣机，应该用定冠词。

× My favorite machine is washing machine because washing machine could wash all my dirty clothes and I don't wash the clothes by myself.

✓ My favorite machine is the washing machine because the washing machine can wash all my dirty clothes and I don't wash the clothes by myself.

这里用“could”表达能力不准确，应该用“can”表示现在的能力。

× Yes, I think both of them are very important because washing machines and sweeping machines could solve all almost all the chores for humans, and without them humans will do much more housework by themselves.

✓ Yes, I think both of them are very important because washing machines and sweeping machines can solve almost all the chores for humans, and without them humans would have to do much more housework by themselves.

“could”用法不当，表示一般事实应使用“can”；“all almost all”重复，应去掉“all”；“will do much more”表达未来推测，改为“would have to do”更合适。

× Yes, I think both of them are very important because washing machines and sweeping machines could solve all almost all the chores for humans, and without them humans will do much more housework by themselves.

✓ Yes, I think both of them are very important because washing machines and sweeping machines can solve almost all the chores for humans, and without them humans would have to do much more housework by themselves.

“could”表示过去或假设，描述事实时应使用“can”；“will do”表示确定未来，语境中更合适用“would have to”表示假设情况。

× Nope, I never read the instructions before you see any kind of machine, because during the university I majored in a machine and I could solve every problems with the machines.

✓ Nope, I never read the instructions before using any kind of machine, because during university I majored in machinery and I can solve every problem with machines.

“before you see any kind of machine”表达不当，应改为“before using any kind of machine”；“during the university”应为“during university”；“majored in a machine”不合适，应为“majored in machinery”；“every problems”应为“every problem”；“could”改为“can”表示现在能力。

× Nope, I never read the instructions before you see any kind of machine, because during the university I majored in a machine and I could solve every problems with the machines.

✓ Nope, I never read the instructions before using any kind of machine, because during university I majored in machinery and I can solve every problem with machines.

“could”表示过去能力，描述现在能力应使用“can”。

× That depends. Some people don't know much about the machine, so I think these kind of people should read the instructions, but the other kind of people, they may know much about the machines. So instructions may be useless for these kind of people.

✓ That depends. Some people don't know much about machines, so I think these kinds of people should read the instructions, but other kinds of people may know a lot about machines. So instructions may be useless for these kinds of people.

“the machine”应为复数“machines”；“these kind of people”应为“these kinds of people”；“the other kind of people”应为“other kinds of people”；“know much”应为“know a lot”。