Machine— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答は主題に直接答えていますが、文法の誤りや繰り返しがあり、自然さに欠けます。より明確で流暢な表現を心がけ、接続詞を使って文をつなげると良いでしょう。例えば、"My favourite machine at home is my smartphone because it has many useful tools. For instance, I use Google to search for information. Therefore, having a smartphone is essential for my daily life."のように改善できます。

예시: My favourite machine at home is my smartphone because it has many useful tools. For instance, I use Google to search for information. Therefore, having a smartphone is essential for my daily life.

제안: 回答は質問に答えていますが、文法の誤りや意味の不明瞭さが目立ちます。より簡潔で正確な表現を使い、接続詞で文をつなげることを意識しましょう。例えば、"Definitely, washing machines and sweeping machines are important because they save time. People don't need to clean by themselves and can use that time for other activities."のように表現できます。

예시: Definitely, washing machines and sweeping machines are important because they save time. People don't need to clean by themselves and can use that time for other activities.

제안: 回答は内容が伝わりますが、文法の誤りや繰り返しがあります。より自然で流暢な表現を使い、接続詞で理由と結果を明確に示しましょう。例えば、"No, I usually don't read instructions because I think I can figure it out myself. However, I often make mistakes, so I realize that reading instructions is better."のように改善できます。

예시: No, I usually don't read instructions because I think I can figure it out myself. However, I often make mistakes, so I realize that reading instructions is better.

제안: 回答は主旨を伝えていますが、文法の誤りや不自然な表現があります。より明確で自然な英語を使い、理由と結果を論理的に結びつけましょう。例えば、"Definitely, reading instructions helps people make fewer mistakes. Therefore, it is very effective and improves productivity."のように表現できます。

예시: Definitely, reading instructions helps people make fewer mistakes. Therefore, it is very effective and improves productivity.

× I think smartphone smartphone has a lot of tools which I need to.

✓ I think the smartphone has a lot of tools which I need.

The word 'smartphone' is singular and should be preceded by the definite article 'the' to specify it. Also, the repetition of 'smartphone' is unnecessary. This correction clarifies the subject and corrects the singular noun usage.

× Google can search what I wanted to look.

✓ Google can search what I want to look for.

The verb 'wanted' is past tense, but the sentence context requires present tense 'want' because it refers to a general ability. Also, the phrase 'look' should be followed by the preposition 'for' to be grammatically correct.

× Therefore, if I have smartphone, I can spend my daily life.

✓ Therefore, if I have a smartphone, I can manage my daily life.

The sentence lacks the article 'a' before 'smartphone'. Also, 'spend my daily life' is awkward; 'manage my daily life' is more natural. The correction improves sentence structure and clarity.

× It's very essential and.

✓ It's very essential.

The sentence ends abruptly with 'and' without completing the thought. Removing 'and' completes the sentence properly.

× Definitely if their washing machine and sweeping machine at my home people do not need to clean myself, so it is a good way to reduce save their time and they can use another another way to time.

✓ Definitely, if there are washing machines and sweeping machines at my home, people do not need to clean themselves, so it is a good way to save their time and they can use their time in other ways.

The sentence has multiple issues: 'their washing machine and sweeping machine' should be plural 'washing machines and sweeping machines' with 'there are' to indicate existence. 'myself' is incorrect pronoun; it should be 'themselves'. The phrase 'reduce save their time' is redundant; 'save their time' suffices. Also, 'another another way to time' is incorrect; corrected to 'use their time in other ways' for clarity.

× people do not need to clean myself

✓ people do not need to clean themselves

The reflexive pronoun 'myself' does not agree with the plural subject 'people'. The correct reflexive pronoun is 'themselves' for plural subjects.

× they can use another another way to time.

✓ they can use their time in other ways.

The phrase 'another another way to time' is incorrect. The correct preposition is 'in' when referring to 'use time in other ways'. Also, 'another another' is a repetition error.

× No, I can't say yes.

✓ No, I can't say yes.

This sentence is grammatically correct; no correction needed.

× I usually don't read the instructions before using a machine because I think I can figure it myself.

✓ I usually don't read the instructions before using a machine because I think I can figure it out myself.

The phrase 'figure it myself' is incomplete; the correct expression is 'figure it out myself' to indicate understanding or solving something independently.

× However, I always make mistakes so I know reading instruction is better than doing myself.

✓ However, I always make mistakes, so I know reading instructions is better than doing it myself.

The sentence lacks a comma before 'so' to separate clauses. 'instruction' should be plural 'instructions' as it refers to multiple steps. Also, 'doing myself' is incomplete; it should be 'doing it myself' to clarify the action.

× Definitely if people read the instructions, people less people make mistakes.

✓ Definitely, if people read the instructions, fewer people make mistakes.

The phrase 'people less people' is incorrect. The comparative quantifier 'fewer' should be used with countable nouns like 'people'. Also, a comma after 'Definitely' improves readability.

× So it is very effective and productivity to do things.

✓ So it is very effective and productive to do things.

The word 'productivity' is a noun, but the sentence requires an adjective to describe 'to do things'. The correct adjective is 'productive'.