Machine— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is quite short and lacks clarity. Try to directly answer the question with a clear topic sentence and then add specific details about why you like the bike. Also, avoid repeating the word 'machine' unnecessarily and use more natural expressions.

예시: My favourite machine at home is my bike because it helps me travel quickly and enjoy the fresh air. I like riding it in the evenings as it keeps me fit and relaxed.

제안: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors. Make sure to directly answer the question and explain why these machines are important with specific reasons. Use linking words to connect your ideas logically.

예시: Yes, washing machines and sweeping machines are very important because they save time and effort. For example, washing machines help us clean clothes quickly, and sweeping machines keep our homes tidy and hygienic.

제안: Your answer is confusing and has grammatical mistakes. Try to clearly state your habit regarding reading instructions and explain why it is important or not. Use proper sentence structure and linking words.

예시: No, I usually do not read the instructions because I am familiar with most machines. However, I understand that reading instructions is important to use new machines safely and correctly.

제안: Your answer is relevant but needs better grammar and clearer expression. Use linking words and more natural phrasing to explain why reading instructions is important.

예시: Yes, I believe it is very important to read instructions because without proper knowledge, a person may not use the machine correctly, which can cause damage or accidents.

× My favorite machine in my home, that is my bike.

✓ My favorite machine in my home is my bike.

The original sentence is a fragment and lacks a proper verb to connect the subject and complement. Adding 'is' correctly forms a complete sentence.

× Yes, washing machines are very important for us because if we can't wash our machines and leave them dirty, it would not good for us or also for machine.

✓ Yes, washing machines are very important for us because if we can't wash our clothes and leave them dirty, it would not be good for us or for the machine.

The pronoun 'machines' is incorrectly used instead of 'clothes' which are washed. Also, 'would not good' is missing the verb 'be'. Correcting these improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Machine got damaged by that things.

✓ The machine gets damaged by those things.

The sentence lacks an article before 'machine' and uses incorrect verb tense and plural form. Adding 'The' and changing to present tense 'gets' and plural 'those things' corrects the sentence.

× No, I did not read any type of instruction because I know all the type of knowledge that I have machines.

✓ No, I do not read any type of instruction because I know all the knowledge about the machines I have.

The sentence incorrectly mixes past tense 'did not read' with present knowledge. Changing to present tense 'do not read' aligns with the context. Also, 'all the type of knowledge' is corrected to 'all the knowledge about the machines' for clarity.

× But it is important to read machines instruction before.

✓ But it is important to read the machine's instructions beforehand.

The phrase 'machines instruction' lacks possessive form and plural 'instructions'. Also, 'before' is better replaced with 'beforehand' for natural expression.

× Yes, it is very important to read instructions because if a person did not know knowledge about the machine, how they can use the machine properly.

✓ Yes, it is very important to read instructions because if a person does not have knowledge about the machine, they cannot use it properly.

The sentence incorrectly uses past tense 'did not know' and awkward phrasing 'know knowledge'. Changing to present tense and clearer phrasing improves grammatical correctness and clarity.