Machine— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答中存在语法错误和重复，表达不够流畅。建议简化句子结构，避免重复，并使用更准确的时态和词汇。

예시: My favourite machine at home is the refrigerator because I enjoy filling it with all the foods I like. It makes me feel satisfied and happy.

제안: 回答中有语法错误和重复，表达不够清晰。建议使用连贯的句子，避免重复，并且用连接词使表达更流畅。

예시: Yes, both washing machines and sweeping machines are very important because they help keep my home clean and comfortable. For example, after a long day, the washing machine cleans my clothes and makes them smell fresh, which helps me relax.

제안: 回答简短且缺乏细节。建议扩展回答，说明原因或举例，使回答更完整。

예시: Actually, I usually don't read the instructions because I learned how to use the machines from my mother when I was young.

제안: 回答中有重复和表达不清的问题。建议简化句子，避免重复，并具体说明阅读说明书的重要性。

예시: Yes, I think reading the instructions is important because it helps prevent damage to the machine and ensures I use it correctly.

× I will say the refrigerator because when I filling it up with all the things I I want and I interested in, I feel very satisfied.

✓ I will say the refrigerator because when I am filling it up with all the things I want and am interested in, I feel very satisfied.

这里动词fill后面应该用现在分词形式，表示正在进行的动作，故用"am filling"。另外，"I interested in"缺少动词，应该是"I am interested in"。

× when I filling it up with all the things I I want and I interested in

✓ when I am filling it up with all the things I want and am interested in

句中"I I want"重复，应去掉一个"I"。此外，"I interested in"缺少动词"am"，应改为"I am interested in"。

× Yes, definitely both of them can keep help me to keep my home clean and comfortable.

✓ Yes, definitely both of them can help me to keep my home clean and comfortable.

"keep help me"结构错误，应去掉"keep"，改为"can help me"。

× Especially the washing machines after a whole day work to wash the clothes, make it smell good.

✓ Especially the washing machine, after a whole day's work washing the clothes, makes them smell good.

句子结构混乱，缺少主谓一致。"washing machines"单数复数不一致，且"make it smell good"应改为"makes them smell good"，保持主谓一致。

× It's very it makes me makes me calm down.

✓ It really makes me calm down.

句子重复且主谓不一致，应简化为"It really makes me calm down"。

× Actually not. I learn how to use the machine from my mother.

✓ Actually not. I learned how to use the machine from my mother.

描述过去的动作，动词应使用过去式"learned"。

× Yes, I admit the importance of reading instructions before using it.

✓ Yes, I admit the importance of reading instructions before using them.

"instructions"为复数，代词应使用复数形式"them"。

× It can prevent some damage to the machine to the machine of a high extent.

✓ It can prevent a high extent of damage to the machine.

句子结构不通顺，重复"to the machine"，应调整为"prevent a high extent of damage to the machine"。