Machine— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is unclear and contains many grammatical errors which affect the natural flow and effectiveness. Try to give a clear topic sentence directly answering the question, followed by specific reasons using linking words. Avoid redundancy and keep your answer within 5 sentences.

예시: My favourite machine at home is the oven because it saves a lot of time. For example, when I come back home hungry, I can quickly heat my food using the oven. Moreover, it is very easy to use and helps me enjoy hot meals without much effort.

제안: Your answer addresses the question but has grammatical mistakes and some unclear phrases. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly and be more specific about how these machines help. Also, correct subject-verb agreement and word choice for clarity.

예시: Yes, I think washing machines and sweeping machines are very important nowadays. Because people have busy schedules and many women work outside, these machines save a lot of time. For instance, washing machines clean clothes quickly, and sweeping machines keep the house tidy with less effort.

제안: Your answer is relevant but contains grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Try to make your sentences clearer and use linking words like 'because' and 'moreover' properly. Also, avoid redundancy and keep your answer concise.

예시: Yes, I always read the instructions before using a machine because I am not familiar with new devices. Moreover, reading instructions helps me use the machine efficiently and avoid mistakes.

제안: Your answer has unclear phrases and grammatical errors that affect clarity. Focus on giving a clear topic sentence and supporting details with correct grammar. Use linking words to connect ideas logically and avoid confusing words like 'animal chain'.

예시: In my opinion, reading instructions before using a machine is very important. It helps us use the machine safely and efficiently. Moreover, it prevents mistakes and ensures the machine works as we expect.

× Play my name is Hindi at my home, but which I liked most is the oven, which was It saves a lot of time when I when I was not at home and I have I want to eat I want to eat hot food at the time the oven place.

✓ My favourite machine at home is the oven because it saves a lot of time when I am not at home and I want to eat hot food at that time.

The original sentence has multiple sentence structure errors including unclear phrasing and repetition. The corrected sentence is clear and grammatically correct, properly expressing the idea that the oven is the favourite machine because it saves time and provides hot food when the speaker is not at home.

× Nowadays because of the factory schedule and busy life and women are also working so machines like washing machines and wiping machines plays and very crucial role in day-to-day life because it saves a lot of time and make the work very easy.

✓ Nowadays, because of factory schedules and busy life, and since women are also working, machines like washing machines and wiping machines play a very crucial role in day-to-day life because they save a lot of time and make work very easy.

The original sentence has subject-verb agreement errors: 'machines' is plural, so the verb should be 'play' not 'plays'. Also, 'it saves' should be 'they save' to agree with plural 'machines'. The corrected sentence fixes these errors and improves clarity.

× Yes, it is important for everyone to read the instructions before using any machinery because they are not habitual or for the new machinery and it is important for us to know how to actually the machine work.

✓ Yes, it is important for everyone to read the instructions before using any machinery because they may not be familiar with the new machinery, and it is important for us to know how the machine actually works.

The original sentence misuses pronouns and has unclear phrasing. 'They are not habitual' is incorrect; it should be 'they may not be familiar'. Also, 'how to actually the machine work' is incorrect; it should be 'how the machine actually works'. The correction clarifies these points.

× Moreover, it also help us to use the every equipment very efficiently.

✓ Moreover, it also helps us to use every equipment very efficiently.

The verb 'help' should be in third person singular form 'helps' to agree with singular subject 'it'. Also, 'the every equipment' is incorrect; 'every equipment' is correct without 'the'. The correction addresses these errors.

× This is alpha my opinion. Great instruction before the use of animal chain plays an important role before.

✓ In my opinion, reading instructions before using any machine plays an important role.

The original sentence is unclear and contains errors like 'alpha my opinion' and 'animal chain' which seem to be misheard or mistyped. The correction provides a clear and grammatically correct sentence conveying the intended meaning.

× By reading the instruction, we can use the machine safely and efficiently.

✓ By reading the instructions, we can use the machine safely and efficiently.

'Instruction' should be plural 'instructions' because it refers to multiple guidelines. The article 'the' is correctly used before 'machine'. The correction fixes the singular/plural mismatch.

× Moreover, it prevents mistakes and ensure that the machine works properly as per our need.

✓ Moreover, it prevents mistakes and ensures that the machine works properly as per our needs.

The verb 'ensure' should be in third person singular form 'ensures' to agree with singular subject 'it'. Also, 'need' should be plural 'needs' to indicate various requirements. The correction addresses these errors.