Machine— Part 1 채점 보고서
대화
Part 1
시험관
What is your favourite machine in your home?
수험생
That would be the coffee machine because I think it is convenient to use it. When I have the switch, I will put it down and I will get a cup of coffee soon, so I liked it.
시험관
Do you think washing machines and sweeping machines are important?
수험생
Yes I I do. Without this washing machine and sweeping machines my life will get more and more hard because I need to wash clothes by myself and sweep the floor by myself. I think it save it spans me.
시험관
Do you read the instructions before using a machine?
수험생
No, I don't. I'm a careless person you know, so I'm too lazy to read the instructions before using a machine. Usually I use it straight forward.
시험관
Do you think it is important to read the instructions?
수험생
Well, I think it is important to read instructions because when we read the instructions, we will use it more safely, more and more efficiently. That's why I need to read the instruction before I use it.
평가
총점
Part 1
What is your favourite machine in your home?
점수: 60.0제안: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，例如“when I have the switch, I will put it down”表达不清晰，且句子结构混乱。建议使用更自然流畅的表达，并注意时态一致性。
예시: My favourite machine at home is the coffee machine because it is very convenient. When I press the button, it quickly makes a cup of coffee for me, which I really enjoy.
Do you think washing machines and sweeping machines are important?
점수: 55.0제안: 回答中有重复词汇和语法错误，如“I I do”和“it save it spans me”，表达不清晰。建议简化句子结构，使用正确的时态和单复数形式，并避免重复。
예시: Yes, I do. Without washing machines and sweeping machines, my life would be much harder because I would have to wash clothes and clean the floor manually, which takes a lot of time and effort.
Do you read the instructions before using a machine?
점수: 65.0제안: 回答较为直接，但“I'm a careless person”表达不够正式，且“use it straight forward”用词不准确。建议使用更合适的词汇表达态度，并注意短语搭配。
예시: No, I usually don't read the instructions because I find it time-consuming. I prefer to try using the machine directly and learn by experience.
Do you think it is important to read the instructions?
점수: 70.0제안: 回答表达了观点，但句子结构重复且有语法错误，如“more and more efficiently”。建议使用多样的句型和准确的表达。
예시: Yes, I believe reading instructions is important because it helps us use machines safely and efficiently. Therefore, I always make sure to read the manual before operating any new device.
문법
× When I have the switch, I will put it down and I will get a cup of coffee soon, so I liked it.
✓ When I have the switch, I put it down and get a cup of coffee soon, so I like it.
这里使用了过去时态“liked”，但句子描述的是习惯性动作，应使用一般现在时“like”。
× Without this washing machine and sweeping machines my life will get more and more hard because I need to wash clothes by myself and sweep the floor by myself.
✓ Without these washing machines and sweeping machines, my life will get harder and harder because I need to wash clothes by myself and sweep the floor by myself.
“this washing machine and sweeping machines”中单复数不一致，应统一为复数“these washing machines and sweeping machines”。
× I think it save it spans me.
✓ I think it saves me time.
原句中“save it spans me”表达不清且语法错误，应改为“saves me time”，意思是“节省我的时间”。
× Usually I use it straight forward.
✓ Usually I use it straightforwardly.
“straight forward”应作为副词使用，正确形式为“straightforwardly”，表示“直接地”。
× That's why I need to read the instruction before I use it.
✓ That's why I need to read the instructions before I use it.
“instruction”应使用复数形式“instructions”，因为通常说明书是多条指示的集合。
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