Machine— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 你的回答有些重复，且句子结构不够自然。建议简化表达，避免重复，并且使用更流畅的句子结构。

예시: My favourite machine at home is the air conditioner because I live in Singapore, where it is very hot and humid.

제안: 回答中有很多语气词和语法错误，表达不够清晰。建议减少语气词，注意主谓一致，并且用连贯的句子表达观点。

예시: Yes, I think washing machines and sweeping machines are very important for families because they help keep the home clean and save time.

제안: 回答不完整且含糊，语法和表达不准确。建议用完整句子表达自己的习惯，并解释原因。

예시: No, I usually prefer to learn how to use a machine by trying it myself because I find the instructions too long and difficult to understand.

제안: 回答中有语法错误和用词不当，建议注意时态和单复数形式，并用更准确的词汇表达观点。

예시: Yes, I think it is important to read the instructions before using some machines, especially cooking appliances, to avoid damaging them.

× For sure, uh, both machine are very important, uh, as, uh, for a family, because if you got a family, you, you both only this kind of machine to make your home tidy and to, uh, make everything more speed up, more efficient.

✓ For sure, uh, both machines are very important, uh, as, uh, for a family, because if you have a family, you need both kinds of machines to make your home tidy and to, uh, make everything faster and more efficient.

这里的“both machine”应为复数形式“both machines”，因为“both”表示两个，后面名词应使用复数形式。

× For sure, uh, both machine are very important, uh, as, uh, for a family, because if you got a family, you, you both only this kind of machine to make your home tidy and to, uh, make everything more speed up, more efficient.

✓ For sure, uh, both machines are very important, uh, as, uh, for a family, because if you have a family, you need both kinds of machines to make your home tidy and to, uh, make everything faster and more efficient.

“you got a family”中“got”应改为“have”，因为这里是一般现在时态，表示拥有。

× I would say my favorite machine in my home is air conditioner since I live in Singapore so I think air conditioner is the my favorite machine of my home.

✓ I would say my favorite machine in my home is the air conditioner since I live in Singapore, so I think the air conditioner is my favorite machine at my home.

“the my favorite”中“the”与“my”重复，应去掉“the”。“machine of my home”应改为“machine at my home”，更符合英语习惯。

× I would say my favorite machine in my home is air conditioner since I live in Singapore so I think air conditioner is the my favorite machine of my home.

✓ I would say my favorite machine in my home is the air conditioner since I live in Singapore, so I think the air conditioner is my favorite machine at my home.

“air conditioner”前缺少冠词“the”，因为特指家里的空调。

× I would say no 'cause I love to uh, try and narrow by myself to uh, more familiar to understand how to use the machine instead of check the menu because the menu generally got a lot of work.

✓ I would say no because I love to try and learn by myself to become more familiar with how to use the machine instead of checking the manual because the manual generally has a lot of information.

“try and narrow by myself”应为“try and learn by myself”，“narrow”用错了词。 “more familiar to understand”应为“become more familiar with”。“check the menu”应为“checking the manual”，且“menu”应为“manual”。

× I would say no 'cause I love to uh, try and narrow by myself to uh, more familiar to understand how to use the machine instead of check the menu because the menu generally got a lot of work.

✓ I would say no because I love to try and learn by myself to become more familiar with how to use the machine instead of checking the manual because the manual generally has a lot of information.

“the menu generally got a lot of work”中“got”应为“has”，因为这里是一般现在时态。

× For sure, for some of the important machine in your home, it's important to read instruction before you use 'cause you might broken it when you first start to use it, especially for like cooking stuff or cooking machine.

✓ For sure, for some of the important machines in your home, it's important to read the instructions before you use them because you might break them when you first start to use them, especially for cooking stuff or cooking machines.

“some of the important machine”应为“some of the important machines”，名词复数。 “read instruction”应为“read the instructions”，加冠词且复数。 “you might broken it”应为“you might break it”，动词形式错误。

× For sure, for some of the important machine in your home, it's important to read instruction before you use 'cause you might broken it when you first start to use it, especially for like cooking stuff or cooking machine.

✓ For sure, for some of the important machines in your home, it's important to read the instructions before you use them because you might break them when you first start to use them, especially for cooking stuff or cooking machines.

“cooking machine”应为复数“cooking machines”，因为指的是一类机器。

× I would say no 'cause I love to uh, try and narrow by myself to uh, more familiar to understand how to use the machine instead of check the menu because the menu generally got a lot of work.

✓ I would say no because I love to try and learn by myself to become more familiar with how to use the machine instead of checking the manual because the manual generally has a lot of information.

“instead of check”应为“instead of checking”，动名词形式。