Machine— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is understandable but could be more natural and concise. Try to start directly with your favorite machine and explain why you like it using clear and simple sentences. Avoid redundancy and improve grammar for better clarity.

예시: My favorite machine at home is the fan because it keeps me cool and operates quietly, which makes my environment comfortable.

제안: Your answer has good ideas but lacks clarity and contains grammatical errors. Focus on directly answering the question, use linking words to connect ideas, and be specific about the benefits of these machines.

예시: Yes, I think washing machines and sweeping machines are important because they save time and help clean clothes and floors more efficiently, allowing us to focus on other tasks.

제안: Your answer is repetitive and unclear due to hesitation and filler words. Try to speak more confidently and clearly, directly stating why you read instructions, and avoid unnecessary repetition.

예시: Yes, I always read the instructions before using a machine because they explain how to operate it correctly and safely.

제안: Your answer has good points but contains grammatical mistakes and unclear phrasing. Make sure to use correct grammar and clearly explain why reading instructions is important, focusing on safety and proper use.

예시: Yes, I believe reading instructions is important because they provide safety information and guide you on how to use the machine properly.

× Machines available in my home, but among them I like fan because it helps me to stay in a cool environment and helps me to be very silent.

✓ Machines are available in my home, but among them I like the fan because it helps me to stay in a cool environment and helps me to be very silent.

The original sentence is missing the verb 'are' after 'Machines' to form a complete sentence. Also, 'fan' should be preceded by the definite article 'the' because it refers to a specific fan among the machines. Adding 'are' and 'the' corrects the sentence structure and article usage.

× I think less significance and sweeping mission are important because it can save our time which we can utilize in other things and it helps to clean clothes faster and floor cleaner.

✓ I think washing machines and sweeping machines are important because they can save our time which we can utilize in other things and they help to clean clothes faster and floors cleaner.

The original sentence has incorrect words 'less significance' and 'sweeping mission' which seem to be errors for 'washing machines' and 'sweeping machines'. Also, 'it' should be 'they' to agree with the plural subject. 'Floor cleaner' should be 'floors cleaner' to indicate the floor is cleaner. Correcting these improves clarity and subject-verb agreement.

× Yes, I read the instruction before using the machine because in the instructions there are provided different types of uh, men, uh, different types of, uh, manuals that helps uh, to build, uh, the machine or how to use the machine.

✓ Yes, I read the instructions before using the machine because in the instructions there are different types of manuals that help to build the machine or how to use the machine.

The word 'instruction' should be plural 'instructions' to match the context. The phrase 'there are provided' is awkward; 'there are' suffices. 'Men' is likely a mispronunciation or error and should be removed. 'Helps' should be 'help' to agree with the plural subject 'manuals'. Removing filler words and correcting verb agreement improves clarity.

× Yes, I think it is very important to reduce the instruction because it provide safety features and how to operate in a safely.

✓ Yes, I think it is very important to read the instructions because they provide safety features and how to operate safely.

The phrase 'reduce the instruction' is incorrect; it should be 'read the instructions'. 'Instruction' should be plural 'instructions'. 'It provide' should be 'they provide' to agree with plural 'instructions'. 'In a safely' is incorrect; 'safely' alone is correct. Correcting these errors improves meaning and grammar.